How do we give this story gems? I have 16 Gems and there are NO GEM votes to give end of chapters. It s/b ranked in the Top 3. It's as great as The Charismatic Charlie Wade story.
Has this really completed? Why does it say \\"ongoing\\"?
Omg I loved this book , I’m not a big reader as I really struggled to get in to books as I’m not a strong reader but this book has me hooked and I’m starting the gamma book tonight I can’t wait ! Also can you list all your books so I can read them all please
Let me just say — the pacing in these chapters is absolutely ruthless and I love it. Chapter 7 starts with a conflict (should they bring Wen Lan along or not?), then immediately pivots to Wen Lan discovering the energy pearls, then she's digging them out of zombies like it's a treasure hunt, then Su Han shows up and everything shifts. The chapter doesn't let you breathe and neither does the story. The transition from the backyard scene into Chapter 3's "Prenatal Education Should Start Early?" is genius. Wen Lan is literally having this revelation about the babies absorbing energy when music plays and they get happy, and the chapter title itself is basically the author winking at you. Then Chapter 4 immediately undercuts that warmth with Su Han detecting TWO psychic fields inside her. One moment you're thinking about cute prenatal vibes and the next you're realizing the captain knows something he shouldn't know. What really works is how the author controls information. We know Wen Lan is pregnant. Wen Che doesn't know. Su Han apparently knows. The reader is sitting between two levels of dramatic irony and it creates this constant low-grade tension even during the quieter moments. The energy pearl discovery scene itself is paced like a heist — they're collecting treasures, counting their haul, realizing the daily limit — and then it transitions smoothly into the convoy journey where the real suspense begins. I stayed up way too late reading this. No regrets.
I just finished this book and all caught up. I love it. You did a great job. Thanks for the bonus chapters. I hope there will be more.
The story is dragging over 450 chapters & no where near ending
This book is so damn amazing, can’t wait for more chapters especially the wedding and hoping we get to see all the weddings and babies. Can’t wait to see if the grandmother wins another bet lol
There story keeps you interested from beginning to finish.
great story! loving all the characters
Introducing
interesting story
A great story! I love the ending. It was really good. Peyton you have a gift . . . . . keep writing