This story have a great development. It is good system story. So give it 5 star. Now for post the review I will write something that doesn't have any thing do with wed novel. ?.........................................12345566788899000988876655432111467901234667888999990009865335790631260122334556789001124501l~~~~~~~~~|.
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I only really have one comment, and it’s vital that the person publishing this book on here reads it: Please, for the love of god, find someone to handle the grammar for you. Find a proper translator to handle this so it doesn’t look so blocky or cut off in areas.I read the last book you had on here, but after a while, the grammar started causing massive headaches. Your story has plenty of potential, you’re a great Storyteller. However, you NEED to find someone who can make it look more readable. You will scare away hundreds of potential readers who can’t handle this lack of care towards the language and the story. Otherwise, you’re doing great. Just make sure you work hard to find someone who has English as their first language to properly go through and fix the grammar. Using translation tools DOES NOT WORK.
Frankly speaking... this book is confusing in terms of their world, u know its set in modern time but u cant deny u get the feeling from those xuanhuan settings with the magic items that keep popping out, and somehow i feel the author is same author for Inverted dragon scales it got same flavours to it.. (i dont know the name for IDS author name LOL). But personally for me i enjoy the ride and looking forward for more development. Thank to the translator, cheers!
the story seems good and everything but this has to be the most confusing thing I've ever read, my brain is hurting from this grammar, I could read a chapter and not understand anything, but the book has potential
What happened to the novel and the author? someone knows??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
NOOOO I LOVE THIS STORY BUT THEY ADDED THE SPIRIT STONE THING. AND IT'S SO EXPENSIVE TOO! 12 SPIRIT STONES PER CHAPTER??? MAN THAT SUCKS :'(
I can already tell this is going to be a novel where the mc has a massive harem and pretty much all male characters are going to be the enemy and he offends someone every 5 seconds I gather this all from the obnoxious title name.I’m really sick of seeing these generic novels it seems like all the authors of these types of books just use the same template and for all of you saying that I should just find a book that suits me and stop complaining I already finished the other, better novels and am left with these uninspired novels. I haven’t read the story yet so I could be wrong but the name touched a sore spot and those authors should be held accountable.
Fun light hearted book. When a little longer 70/100 pages. Could easily sell on Kindle. For around £7....................................................hate leaving long reviews......................................................
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all I needed to see was tortoise instantly I gave five stars for the tortoise ???? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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