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Its a story I would recommend, but not strongly. It has potential and will certainly be well recieved by the LitRPG groups but its pretty basic. Sure I haven't read anything identical and its an intriguing idea but it isn't fast enough to make one hooked. I read the 15 chapters and I loved it but when the updates are like they are(1 chapter everyday or two) its simply hard to hold the same interest as a large chapter everyday. I'm not saying that its a bad pace especially since I have experience writing and I know how hard it is to keep writing while life is going on.The character developement is a tad bland but this isnt a professional book. It seems like the MC was adapting way to quickly and accepting a crazy thing like it was an everyday occurrence. He acted vicious in one chapter to someone who did something nonsensical to the MC but it wasn't that made sense. The world is made to be similar to the real world and even recently(chapter 22 for me) included a real event with some large company but it seemed slightly exaggerated. Not that it is negative to point out. Overall I hope it gets more popular and gets some better pointers and the Author improves the story. Good Luck! I'll be in the shadows lurking like always!
I don't know about this... I hope it gets even better in the future!...................................................................................
More interested in system related...Hope this one will more surprising than others...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Not gonna lie I was intrigued by the first chapter. I love details when I'm reading a novel and so far the chapters that I have read deliver.Secondly, the build up promises for an awesome politics + cultivation adventure and I'm down for it.Five star review for the moment.Gonna review again after reading more chapters
The rewritten version is quite good, since the previous one was all over the place, I appreciate the effort that the author did in rewriting the story.
A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it?How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in,1- His devil side2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town)4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed)5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc...Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way.Writing Quality - 4Stability of Updates - 5Story Development - 3Character Design - 1 World Background - 3The total score - 3.2
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How should I say it It's always the same pattern like first the MC got targeted, he defeat then ruthless plan from enemy then counter and defeat the whole clan.I'm also confused about the MC we don't know much about him just a reincarnator but that's all !! Wtf it's been +100 chapter and it's only a the beginning that he talked about it then after there's nothing, such joke... .I've also a problem with this stupid MC he can't even predict the plan of his enemy even though it's been 3 years he's in this world and he got bullied a lot bc of his trash skill at first no? But now right after he got his "Super amazing incredible system" he became arrogant and disdain other people even thought he really didn't do anything to get this power just grind and forge. Anyway back to the topic the protagonist doesn't learn much from his past experience and is still and always making bad decisions and don't make plan to prevent these accidents .He doesn't even train his technique to be stronger, the Chara dev is too messed up from my opinion there's so many problems that I could write a book with it.
An overall good read. The MC is not a typical overachiever hero or sociopath killing machine, he just doesnt care about anything. He is like in a constant state of depression. Character build up is good. And please everyone don't just assume how the story will go. There is aa girl in love with the mc and everybody in the comments seem sure that it will end up all lovey dovey couple and break the MCs uncaring character. Spoiler: IT DOES NOT. Trust the author a little bit.
I'm not really good at criticizing and in advance sorry for my bad english.This novel is so promising but the author is still not good enough to write down how the story will move forward. I may not be capable of writing stories like the great authors from those popular books but they say that an observer can see more from their perspective.From the early chapters and around chapter 100 or so, I have already seen somethings that seems stupid (sorry for my language) Although some things are just some minor details in the story. Here are the things that comes to my mind after reading and pondering for a while while taking a dump: First it is said thatcultivators need to absorb nutrients to prevent their life force from being spend as a support their cultivation or something like that but why is the mc not using those things that supply enough nutrients for his body anymore after maxing out his Stonebirth monkey gene? He got lots of money from the virtual world of the Nazi but he spent it on the virtual world too instead of buying cultivation resources.Second is that why did the mc not think of the possibility that the Nazi clan can track him with the ship he got from mars since the virtual world that he got is connected to that ship, and that virtual world is one of the Nazi clan's main source of money? Since that world is much much more advance than our current world the Nazi clan should have lots of ways to track him down. Although we still don't know if in the future chapters this will be mentioned, shouldn't there at least be some forebodings or hints that the people from Nazi clan is searching for him using what I said above since (I think) more than 50 chapters has passed after his escape from mars from the current?The next one is the thing about the mc's family and the guy from the main clan before that tries to invite him by starting to being a lacky first, why can't this guy think of using the mc's family to threaten the mc? And why would the mc left his family there? didn't he said that the only thing that is chaining him down is his family so shouldn't that be more than enough of a reason to take his family away from the clan to prevent anyone from using them to threaten him?I really think that some parts of the story is contradicting especially after the chapter where the mc got that spirituality gene or something since that gene can make him know of the possible dangers why can't he think of the possibilities that I have mentioned above. But although I said those things I will still continue reading this novel as we never know what the future may holds for us as change is always happening around us and everyone is improving at every minute so the author can probably improve this story in the future. *There are more things I wanted to point out but I have forgotten about them during the process of restructuring my sentences *
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