Wow, that's really amazing. It's the first time I've really come across this kind of farming novel. The novel about cultivation relates to the law that knowledge is power. Also the hero reminds me of Leylin's character from the novel Magus The Wizard's World, a hero eager to know. My only wish or advice if this is true is to make the viewer see the progress of the hero step by step, do not jump at the time, I know that this is difficult, but try as much as you can, because this way you will succeed in attracting the audience also. Try to make the cultivation system deep in the sense that there are many requirements for progress In cultivation, strict conditions and provisions do not make progress just absorbing qi, and the last thing that I hope to focus on is to make between one level and another great difference as big as heaven and earth, like even if they turn 1000 cultivators collecting qi fighting someone at the level of the institution, he will defeat them without Any fatigue or injury will make the narration strict rules. The viewer will also be excited when the hero reaches a new great level because the viewer will really feel that there is a difference between the levels. Also try to make farmers rare, mysterious and revered things that have their own rules. Give each level a right of respect, such as the level of the foundation institution. Make in Taif the number of people who reached this level approximately 100 people. This will give the viewer really the difficulty of farming, and every time the hero rises a new level was People like him are less. In short, give each level its status. Do not make everything fodder for the defender. If you want advice, do not care about it. Did you not like it, which is to add something like a chip from the novels of Magus, the Wizard's World, and similar novels that will be really interesting? Imagine with me "The farmer who seeks knowledge in a world "Mysterious and Dark Cultivation" and that's all I have. I hope it helped you. You are free to reject all my advice. Thank you for your time.
I have to be honest, the intial story hooked me up, but at some point it bores me when nothing still happens. On the other hand, I am excited on what will happen next. I enjoyed Colby, Donald and Heidi. Keep it up Kid!
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Wow! Just so you know, I am not a very sci-fi person but this does make me want to keep reading and know what happened in the past for our male lead to become like that. I also see that you're heavily influenced by Japanese media.I did find it difficult to keep up sometimes when there was a sudden change in tenses or the genders while describing the events. Otherwise, it is really a great read, and I, most probably, will continue reading it. I personally really like characters like the raven head maiden. They are the best but my favorite part is male lead's interaction with his li'l sister XDAnd also, there is some element of comedy in-between and I really like it.
The story is quite interesting. the character is not useless to remain traumatized due to his ability but to use it correctly in a separate way.Now I can only say that they should read the novel, it is quite interesting.
Enjoying the Story so far! Even if there cringe moments...that pretty much make me laugh given alex personality just far Side note Don’t let the haters put you down!If ain’t contructive Criticism/Valid point, let them know the door right there? or ignore it Wish you the best! Sending virtual hug!
This novel is amazing, writing feels like I'm reading a true novel from a bookstore instead of some cliche filled web novel. The story is pretty good so far and the world building done by the author is massive, lots of content. The main character is lovely, childish at times (because he is 7 ATM) but also very smart with a solid analytical way of thinking through problems (all due to his personal circumstances, story stuff)
Its great and nice novel to past some times and great background and a unique character but why is that updates take long ... So I'm waiting on the new updates overall it is a nice novel
Story was great. Could of gone into more detail of li's background. And the background of the guy his soul went into.
read over 150 chapters in MTL.. the story is kinda meh.. martial arts here tends to be kinda like "martial arts master" with no qi n all but with fighting concept n all that.. but it's very terrible in comparison.. it was pretty solid n clearly mentioned over there but here it's just put out badly.. n the way it's progressing it seems like author has messed up the power systems n wants to bring back the normal cultivation systems.. story is kinda fine but as a cultivation/martial arts specific novel I'd expect it's power system to be good or atleast clear n not keep changing since it wasn't planned properly
Honestly this is a lot better than most of the trail reads these past few weeks, the way it's written doesn't make it so generic with the harem seeking mc, a bunch of faceslapping, and constant antagonists. So in the end i really recommend this.
Please support author with your votes and review guys! The author is talented, but lack of public... Give a try ? and share some love, his work is worth it.