I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for readers, I can tell you I don't have many friends to share this with, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you continue the story through the end and have a satisfying ending, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you EVER drop this, I will look for you... I will find you... and I will.... lock you in my basement until you continue writing :p
To be honest, I feel that this novel is one of the best ones in the boss of the game reality type. It shows a sense of reality of another world unlike other novels. It makes you feel that it is truly another world based on the players perspective, giving yourself a sense of reality ,as if it trifling existed.Very Minor SpoilerThe game system which was made was very reasonable using a existing power system to catagorize the players increasing power. Additionally the way how they increase their power is also reasonable as it had already existed and not created out of nothing unlike other novels which makes it more of a video game instead of another world.Very Minor Spoiler ENDI hope everyone gives this novel a try even if you have an aversion to video game novels, I assure you this is very different.Thank you everyone for reading this and I hope you have a nice day!
Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out... Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted! But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource. I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting.And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)
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I read this till ch. 1202This one has an op protag with op friends, BUT his enemies has 100% plot armor.I can't believe some enemies are important to the author that they are suddenly saved or ignored because of some stupid reasons.I got frustated for the fact that, for the plot to continue, enemies will live every f****** time.
So having read past chapter 80 I feel fully confident in giving my review. This book is not enjoyable to read, and the reason why is somewhat hard to spot. The biggest flaw is that I, as a reader, actively want Kael to die. He is a whiny, crybaby who got what he deserved. He says that he suddenly has trust for women again after his mom had stepped out on his dad...but why? He trusts two women, one of whom had a child with another man. None of the reasoning seems to hold together very well. The dark elements are done really well, but they don't seem to ever be in the forefront.The universe itself is fairly decent, a good story could definitely grow from these basic story roots, but it never does. While it is possible that Kael eventual grows a set of testicles, I find that very unlikely. Even if he does, these 80 chapters are not salvageable.
Good character but a few too many shota moments in my opinion. I also don't see much use in the system that he got. it's either fan service or jokes.
Always wondered, what would happen if all the "Protagonists" meet up together? Woulf there be a fight, a peaceful relationship, neutral relationship. Comment your ideas in comment
If this does not encourage people to take Mathematics seriously and to actually enjoy learning it, then I doubt that I could ever convince that this book will make your heart burn with either envy or inspiration for the simple fact that the Maths have me going bonkers.The author has to be twisted enough to hurt our poor minds with simple question and answer; it hurts my honor to not be able to see the process the gives me that answer... but it hurts me more so that the main character did it in seconds ?TL:DR Please read this book of the art of Maths, as well as suffer a wide variety of emotions tortured out of you by the author ????u200d♂️
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The book is pretty solid as of chap 400 the only issue I have is the author getting mixed up with past and present tense. It’s especially bad at the beginning where majority of the tenses are wrong. But apart from that, the plot and world building is quite enjoyable.
He taught her self defense. When she kicks somebody in the balls. She promises to think of Victor LOL WHAT LOVING TRIBUTE