Waste of time. MC is a family man when it comes to mommy, sister and daddy, but just kills random people over stupid crap like wanting a tour guide. That isn't even a good demon lord, that's just a psycho MC who you can't even like. Dude can break a kid's arm over an interuption, kill families and scheme in the dark like a rat, then wants to bow his head down to mama and papa over everything. Lived for millions of years, made this world, was sad over losing his loved ones, then he himself inflicts that same pain on random people for nothing at all. I don't understand how crappy someone can be when developing character, but this author wins lol. He is either a demon lord aka 100% evil, or some b.s family/demon lord where he kills enemies but is at least tolerant to strangers like he was with the village elder and those girls. Why didn't he become evil then? They mean ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO HIM. His behavior is such a joke based on this bad writing. But you managed to turn him into some psycho. Random people fighting against a beast, let's scheme to kill them all, muahaha. No, that is just shìtty writing. This is the so called demon lord? Seriously? A mommy's boy one chapter, a crazy MC who kills random people for nothing at all the next? Yeah, dropping this confusing pile of dog turd. And it's been out for 4 damn months and we're just on chapter 79? No thanks. Slow ass updates.
I really like writing style of the book. The author is very talented and shows a lot of potential. The story line is pretty interesting as well! I would actually say it’s better than some contracted stories on this app. Finding hidden talents on this app is always great :)
Hidden Gem. It is a great sports story that I am bv happy to have found. I hope the author keeps up the good work. heads Up: The grammar and length area work through but the author has shown improvement. Really excited for more.
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Instead of going to H city and building a base the MC is just waste his time, very bad character design as well, preparation and planning are very stupid, many unnecessary actions and risk, the MC brain is a whackadoo when It comes to responsibilities.
just as GleamInAbyss said it is a promising Novel and i like Zerglings and generally characters/monsters from starcraft II and fantasy creature´s.
Well, I like what I've seen from the book, I dislike the fact that he is a very naive and soft guy, but thank God he changes, not a really cold MC, but knowing that he has to do what he has to do to get the job done. I also like how he's not really OP from the beginning, how he grinds levels to get stronger and I also hope that he and Hana(aka The Ice Queen ?,) become a couple. ????Anyways, so far so good. Great book, with loads of potential
Feeling awkward purchasing a silly game hits too close to home. The transition of reality was in depth and imaginable. The description of the MC's senses were realistic and relevant. Ren (possibly sarcastically) mistaking getting knocked out for being summoned was particularly enjoyable, and a great way to transfer chapters! Great work.
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How is it possible that people haven't reviewed this book? It is literally better than most translated books. The chapters are very long and there aren't fillers to do so.
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