LoneRaut
"Nobody knows, voices are that the first time that circus came here, Princess Ying was five and suffered from some sort of trauma, and it was that very same woman to make the kid laugh again and return to normal thanks to her show, so his Majesty probably feels indebted towards her and wishes to pay her back, that is why every year, when the circus returns, he prepares a gift for her."
Maya covered her entire face while screaming.
It's alright.
I love this story sooo much. The character relationships are great and refreshing, the world and powers are hella interesting, and the jokes hit hard. Why is this not popular ?
nice world building and power system. a good evil MC with no harem , romance or any similar poison. keep up the good work author
Wooh, i like post apocalyptic genre's and this so far is the best among them. Please update more. OP and smart MC also takes the cake. I would love to read more
A great story so far with some solid world building. Only 8 chapters right now, but the world explanations and characters really shine. A bit dark at times though.Very excited to see it progress
MISERY!I'm sorry this just hit wrong for me.I'm a blue collar worker in a dead end job, and I listen to web novel to escape that.This story is probably hilarious in China, but for me it's too much pain instead of slapstick.Fourth wall is constantly broken, taking the reader by the shoulder and complaining about kids today,the bad job market, how ridiculous a cultivation world is-- I'd say that it's a parody of the whole cultivation novel genre. The MC has endless bad luck after he is swept away from his mediocre life as a 20 year old to become a hopeless old man who's golden finger is to be a janitor in a cultivation academy, and level up from cleaning.That alone could have been enough or even epic. But as of 21 chapters in, it was too miserable for me to endure anymore.It's definitely meant to be tongue in cheek but it hit too close to home for me to enjoy.
very good........................ ......
yeah, I kinda enjoyed the storyis it harem? and is nyx in the harem? ___________________________________________________________________________
First of all I really love the synopsis, I really do since every time I would read a story I always look at the synopsis since I believe that the synopsis defines the inside of my book and you will know if it will be pretty interesting or nah. So kudos to you for making an interesting synopsis. Next, the title chapters are pretty interesting too, makes you excited to read the next ones. The flow of your story is great, the world building is pretty interesting and amazing. Keep writing!
Read up to chapter 16.The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories.Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words.The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.
