Like it need more updates?????????????????????✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️?????????????????????????????????????????
The ****?The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously.The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.
Title of this novel should be "Another unbalanced MMORPG: Dumb luck specialist". MC is lucky dumbass. He played underpowered class for a month staying at level 1. Then he got ultra lucky mining drop that turned him into OP character (cause you know game balance is a ****). He had 0 contact with other players, knows 0 information about his class and is without his main class weapon (puppet) even though everyone had one. But somehow he is expert player??? Then character development... Except for playing the game he may be ficus for all we know. And considering style i doubt that he will develop later. Worldbuilding... except badly designed game, we know absolutely nothing about RL. Also you get info dump about game here and there.Overall badly written novel. There are much better quality written game novels out there.
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I am curious to learn more about this world and the samsara emperor. Good job author, I support your work..More hearts and love from me ehehehe???
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It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??