man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.
Personally for me it is a near perfect novel. Reasons are 1. The smoothness of story progression2. Characters - very realistic and well thought3. Action scenes are nicely done4. There is a strong sense of purpose in whatever actions the protagonist and side characters performSPOILER BELOWFor the author - I understand why the three energies can’t mix and fuse but desmond being so overwhelmingly talented can’t he use mana as the primary energy, ki or aura for body strengthing and lastly arcanum for the mind/soul. Please think about it dear author, once again absolutely love your work?
This is a scam. Going premium at 5 chapters and the content is just scam. To be honest, there are already signs showing that the mc is an absolute retard and brain dead. The free chapters already made me wanna drop this.
This book seriously stop me in my tracks I love animes and this book is exactly what I have been looking for, from the plot characters and the 100 kids infected soooo good, keep updating author
The main character should be the blond boy. That's how I remember it, Alex, right?The book is beautiful and flowing. I haven't read much, but it looks like quality jewelleryWell, take it, easy man. Good luck.But right now! The main character must be changed.I felt like commenting today. 4 stars!
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Sorry, but to me it’s more like list than a story….
the story looks interesting! there are few chapters now, but the story has intrigued me. I can't want to see what the author comes up with next!
This novel is one of the most well written novel I've came across in recent time,the world building even though small is wonderful and it'll surely expand in upcoming chapters,the mc is good even though a little Cruel and understandably so but he is still likeable, the cultivation system is also unique and well thought out and the whole asura conqueror theme gives it an exciting turn,but I wanted to ask that it's an original series or a translation.
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