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Man, I haven't enjoyed a book this much in a long time.. everything about it was amazing, and the MC is just my kind of MC. hurry and release more, fam. I'm here for it
The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".
it seems like a good draft but where can i find the actual manga this novel is all i can find an ts pretty much word for word the manga so can someone point me in the right direction.
This book was truly amazing despite having only 2 chapters. The writing was so friendly that I could not help but say hi over and over again. I truly wish to see more chapters of this book.
I have never heard of a book like this before! This teenage girl is so dedicated to her foster brothers and sisters that she's willing to do anything for them to make sure that they have everything that they need, and she's just a kid herself. She's finally found a guy who seems to recognize how special she is, but will they make it work? I keep reading chapters to find out. Can't wait for more to be released!
Honest reviews are here..
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I also started reading the novel after reading this novel synopsis.. Seriously, the synopsis is quite attractive and makes the story seem different from other novel.. But it is not.. In the early chapter, you already feel the rushing of the story..
His parent death.. He got into an orphanage and got bullying some of the guys.. The reason for his bully? Because he is still in shock after the death of his parents, which had happened right in front of his own eyes, and basically, he ignores everyone around him.. And there he meets some girl who is doing to be his loves one..
Then, after a few years, he going to be 18 years old with his loves one and planning their future.. Then, his girlfriend got taken away in front of him, and he can't do anything because of he to weak against yakuza group.. Then, his loves one got r*ped and killed by them..
His thirst for revenge made him awaken the system.. First of all, there is no superpower in this novel.. Only high-tech.. So, I am quite disappointed, which I thought there going to be some superpower, cultivation or anything like that..
The first thing he does is tell the bully on the orphanage.. Well, he got along with that guy after a few years, he lived together on an orphanage.. Then, he also tells his lawyers about his system..
So, the story is quite boringgggg after that.. After reading a few more chapters, I no longer continue the novel.. It really not my cup of tea..
The writing quality is mindblowing, the character development is so reasonable and smooth, its almost shocking... And the presentation is truly magnificent..never read any Author's work that presented the story in such a godly way before... TBH can I know your age esteemed author kun and how did you develop such quality in writing ?
Only 20 chapters out, but so far it's good. My main issue is....where are the triplets? The one he contracted doesn't seem to have any sisters.
Well.... This is kind of entertaining. I can scold mc stupidity in most chapter, so it's a win for me.With the cultivation(If it really just that few stage), I can predict that this gonna be short one. Maybe under 600 chapter instead of usual 3,4000 chapter xianxia novel.The world, we shouldn't hope too much. Maybe it's a one continent world, maybe its a continents world where mc can go to/upgrade to another continent. But from what I can see here, it seems like a one continent world with outer realm invader wudongqiankun and the great ruler.Mc,not a good or bad guy. He just an idiot (Its actually author), got a great cheat(Reality warping that limited to 3 chances and only on stuff that related to him. Also, reasonable, which in my brain equal to 'must be xianxia-ish.'), an isekai(Past life as our earth normal guy who love reading xianxia novel. This is important.), have chance to lose it.I wouldn't spoil much about this novel other than its having good concept, cheat, but bad implementation. This novel will make every reader with common sense rage beyond the world for mc stupidity.P. S: Don't mind the star rating, it's completely different from what I want to give but I don't want to be unfair. If it just ask how much I would rate for overall, it would be 1 star.
the story is good grammar can be problematic a bit, but we ain't here for English diploma are we~~the protagonist is relatable, the game seems fun overall a good read
This is on of my first reviews if not my first one and I can seriously say I enjoy the novel. Although for a Real review I would say it's around 3.5 stars, I enjoy the premise of the story enough to rate it 5 stars. Also it's pretty unique that he told someone he wasn't the original body's owner. All in all I enjoy the story and it's pretty good