Finally something good to read The way it's going is really interesting It's smooth easy to understand .And i like how the world bg info is being told through conversation betn mc and other characters and not some exaggerated naration And it does" not " have any of those s.... like coz the mc is best the greatest only he can travel betn world bla bla or fight while being a mortal blah blah blah
To all those readers who feel that the act of cooking, and washing dishes is an act of a beta mc, I'm afraid that this story may not be up to your taste. And could I please understand what your definition of beta mc is? Because I truly feel that our thoughts about this is a world of a difference apart. I personally hate the concept of a beta mc. For example, cases where a female character acts high and mighty in front of the mc, while ordering the mc to do things that is not beneficial to him. And the mc follows the instructions like a loyal dog. Yeah, I get it. I made two small scenes where the mc didn't want to wash his own dishes, or cook, but because of his sister's words, he followed through with it. Does this mean that he is now a beta mc?I don't know what you think, but in my personal opinion, regarding such small little matters, it doesn't even make a difference.Cooking and washing your own dishes are normal everyday stuff. Doing them won't kill anybody. But I understand that everyone have different thoughts and ideas, and some may be a bit too sensitive towards the topic of 'beta mc'. Or maybe you may argue that it is not the scale of his act that counts, but rather because he listens to his sister's every word. And you may also notice that in the later parts of the story, other than these two scenes, this case does not happen anymore. Honestly, I only wrote those two scenes as a joke, but I didn't expect that some readers would have such an adverse, immense reaction towards it
It's unique. It's different. It's a blood filled, system-fuelled, saga. Read this if you like your protagonists to be absolute madman. If you're a weak soul, you probably can't stomach this though.
Untuk seorang yang kembali kemasalalu, Mc memiliki mentalitas yang buruk.Terutama pada bagian dimana Mc banyak omong kosong saat bertarung, bagi mereka yang memiliki banyak pengalaman hidup dan mati, sangat konyol melihat Mc yang melakukan tindakan idiot disaat pertempuran. Bahkan olah raga lari ringan membutuhkan metode pernafasan yang tepat untuk menjaga stamina, tapi Mc sedang dalam pertarungan hidup dan mati tapi malah mengatakan omong kosong ditengah pertempuran, hanya pemula yang akan memiliki banyak pemikiran disaat pertempuran sengit terjadi, dan juga sangat idiot untuk berteriak kepada monster yang belum tentu mengerti bahasa manusia, bahkan jika Mc ingin melakukan provokasi terhadap musuh, pasti ada banyak cara yang lebih efektif terhadap monster.Selain pada bagian aksi yang buruk, bagian lain dalam novel ini cukup klise karena sebagian besar alur cerita didalam novel ini telah digunakan pada beberapa novel lainnya.Dan saya cukup mengerti karena ini novel pertamamu, tapi saya pikir lebih baik untuk memiliki bab yang lebih pendek tapi tidak memiliki banyak kekurangan. Karena semakin banyak kata berarti lebih banyak kemungkinan kesalahan yang akan muncul didalamnya, tapi semakin sederhana sesuatu maka semakin sedikit kemungkinan kesalahan didalamnya. Lagipula ini adalah karya pertamamu, lebih baik mempuat novel dengan lebih sedikit kata tapi tanpa banyak kekurangan didalamnya, daripada novel dengan banyak kata tapi justru menjadi novel yang penuh omong kosong didalamnya.
Coool Story. First thing first... I love all the works based on virtual games and sometimes I wish to be in one of them.Anyway about this work, I love it. Everything seems awesome, world development - well planned, characters design and development - superb quality, storyline - A1 and writing quality - gooood and since the author is updating this story quite regularly so I believe I'll not have to wait two or three to get updates and that is just awesome. Since this story is in sprity I wish author wins it and for that I'll be quite happy to help him.Well done author.
Im only on ch69 and Im loving it it’s funny and it has a good story line It has some sad parts and wierd parts but thats what i love so much
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This is not a review,perhaps?Lol i just want to recommend this story .It has a great potential ,Not overpowered at all but still the protagonist had enough of power to beat bad guys and tame beauty(ies?)As the MC is growing up the flow also make every chapters become interesting.
It is worth reading. So read it if you have nothing else to read.One of the issues with this LN is that the Author is zzzzzzz. The MC gains some SUPER awesome cultivation methods about 400 chapters into the LN. These methods GREATLY and HUGELY increase that stats of a person without requiring them to increase their cultivation-realm-level. Thus boosting any and all future cultivation by crazy amounts. This would allow them to be one of the more powerful races of their Human Alliance that they are in. Even though no one else can go to the cultivation grounds, that were made for these methods, no where was it stated that they were needed. From everything stated they only help in the cultivation of them. They are not needed to cultivate the methods.After he uses them he just forgets about them and lets the die off him is head. Never shares them with his sister, mother, other earthlings that followed him in the past, the only 4 "kinda" sect friends that he has, or the powerful sect that had his back for the last couple hundred chapters where the sect head is now almost his follower.MC now wants to make his own personal sect, but still doesn't give them these awesome training methods. How and in what way can he create this supposed wishfully powerful sect without training/cultivation methods?On top of this the MC has no life at all. He never walks through a city. Never goes to a restaurant. Never, anything. This LN is more like a shell without the peanuts inside. All the cultivation adventures or whatnot are just time-skipped over. You are given a glimpse into the start of it and then time-skip and "Boom, MC's punch finished it off and monster fell to the ground dead" "congratulations MC you have finished this section of the training. You may now leave.". During this time the MC goes from level 1 of this cultivation realm to level 10 of this cultivation realm. And now on the verge of breaking though to the new cultivation realm all in one time-skip.
A flawed but fairly decent novel. This has a bit of potential. As of CH 19:-Decent Cheat-Generic Protagonist-Decent translation quality-An actual story-Unremarkable worldbuilding-Somewhat confusing power system, not enough has been explained, I've got no idea what the protagonists current realm signifies.Despite my seemingly harsh evaluation above, I still think this is a very strong novel (for a trial read at webnovel). 3.75/5
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Novel is incomplete, apperently anandoned by the author. I’d estimate that there should’ve been around 100 more chapters, possibly more. Enjoyed the novel, so its pretty disappointing that its incomplete. Really wish the site would mark novels like this as abandoned rather than completed.