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The story is good. The only problem is that the MC is really really really really unlikable. He’s dumb, arrogant, he has an extremely short fuse, he is not creative, he is not brave (though not specially cowardly) and half the character development goes something like this: “Uh, I didn’t blow up over some trash talk, I grew up as a person.” 5min later… tries to start a fistfight and insults a dozen people over one disrespectful comment.And finally in one of the last chapters he goes all “woe is me” mixed with a “me against the world” mentality and goes all edgy, though idk if it was another temper tantrum or if he is like this now.Sorry had to vent.
What are ya doing when I was reading peacefully I was interrupted by the no more chapters update more and maybe try daily yourviewership will probably skyrocket
It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a trollAnd then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly
Good book.
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The description of this book is mind-blowing and its character persona is top-notch. The storyline is great and can be read at ease. Its comprehension is lucid. I would recommend this book for any teenager to read.
It's gud and time. Killer one................................................................................................................................
Fun story with likable characters. I'm already afraid of outsiders meddling messing up the balance between the MC and the AI. I can see that ending in terrible disaster. Hurry and get James a body asap Kaz! I just found it and read all available chapters at once so I don't know what the update schedule is like.
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This is great! I love every inch of the story. The characters are loveable, the world building is phenomenal, and each chapters are great! I'll can't wait for more to come!
Well thought-out world, characters with fleshed out personalities, and a fun, upbeat story to keep you going through the day. I thoroughly enjoy the main characters, and learning of the different side-characters has been enjoyable as well.
This is the best book I readed please more I need more it’s so good it’s also a plus that there is NO HAREM...................................................................more please more
