Don’t mind me I’m just a person who’s heart been taken away by the novel ( I’m not dying for new chapters ?) Dear author please have mercy on this person who’s waiting for an update. Also i made this account just for this novel.
After half an hour, everyone was at the center of the Little Heaven. Bleiz and the Marionettes are standing at the front of Adam, waiting for his instructions.
Jun Liu bit NaNa's lips while his hand continued exploring NaNa's body. NaNa seemed to respond well to his touch, so Jun Liu got more excited. This time, Jun Liu's hand traveled upwards towards one of the peaks on NaNa's chest.
poor writing quality. no use of any complex writing techniques, poor syntax, grammar and occasionally spelling. MC character is fairly unrelateable, and has little to no personal growth over time. he simply changes like a flipped switch with no build up or personal growth. the main redeeming feature is the basic premise of the world and it's new rules. reading it during it's free period, but anglophones should not spend any coins on the english version unless the author hires a good translator to correct his mistakes, and goes into more detail regarding his MC, his thoughts, and his emotional state.
the book is nice it has the perfect op situation
I investigated a bit and it seems like this is a thai novel that was published in a thai platform(kawebook). It was seemingly dropped a year ago. It looks like it's someone or the platform trying to make cash by publishing a dropped thai novel in english here. Explains why the author is a ghost and the chapters cost are so high.
Loving the story, keep it up. can't wait to read more as it continues. Even though you do take sometime to update chapters but your writing is impressive
you had a wonderful work, God bless ....
This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes.Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.
I know it's a bit shameless to give myself 5 stars, but I'll still do it.
Hi... I'm kind of frustrated at the moment from reading all the comments. Even though they are not rude, it still hit me since I didn't meet the readers' expectations. And as for that, please forgive me. I will still produce the best quality I could offer.This review isn't about me showing or wanting some pity. I want to the readers know that even I can't be the best writer, I'll be the most understanding writer. I'm taking all of the suggestions and reading plenty of light novels if I have time to widen my horizon, thus, I just want people to understand my concerns.This novel isn't usually a type of fantasy novel that is common or a trope that is repetitively used in the platform. I took a risk to implement such a trope so hope you appreciate it even it's not in the best of you could expect.These all I felt is something I understand. Normally, you won't receive praises every time and criticism will try to hit your shortcomings. It's helpful, I know it, however, I still can't help but feel anxious every time I see a number in my inbox (you know what I'm saying).So, instead of blabbering about my sentiments, I want to let people know that I am still an amateur. I didn't have any training or so, that's why I am still in the process of improving my work. I do mistakes. It's pretty common to me since I'm not a native English speaker (even those who are native speakers still make mistakes as 'no one is perfect').What are my mistakes in this novel? Misused adjectives and adverbs. It's not common and at least you could stumble upon those funny mistakes like 2 out of 10 chapters and 3 in a thousand. But here's a reminder, pronouns are my weakness and sometimes I can't notice such mistakes. My language doesn't have pronouns for genders so hope you understand.Warning, incorrect spelling (but rare than legendary swords). I must let you know that my language doesn't have hard spellings as our words are spelled by how we speak them.Anyway, thank you for visiting and reading this review of mine. Last warning... Awkward structure but not all are grammatically incorrect.
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