Honestly, writing is ok. A few grammatical errors but nothing that stops you from reading fluently. The main problem is that his system doesn’t really do system things, the system is not really explored or talked about, the only thing we know is that it fixes his posture when working out or shooting, I wish the system would get an upgrade or something, he has his system and has played five seasons but still loses to the well know centers just for plot, his effort does not match his win rate, five seasons and bro still feels mediocre. I get the whole mature thing with top lives but bro is too zen, talk about his daily life with actual detail, basketball players and fans talk a lot online add a story on that too, show interactions with other players instead of a line just saying "they talked” actually show the talking and write about some actual behind the scenes. Also bro has two kids and a wife, it’s like they don’t do stuff together, they feel like character fillers. I have not seen any more improvements from mc, especially coming from a guy with 2 lives and even has a system, most importantly he has played 5+ seasons and not much to talk about … especially for a guy with a system.
The story is very well thought out and stable the character design is is one of the best i have seen..... the world background is great and i really like the small details you throw in there at times, i would have gave it a complete 5 stars if there wasnt a few misspellings but those aren't really a big deal (seeing how i probably misspelled a few thing while writing this) to me, other than that its agreat story!
It was totally awesome, the use of vocabulary and also the story was interesting. Overall a hit story with great time passing story. Jai hind
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this rating is for translating names into westernized version.Even if the novel turns out to be a masterpiece I won't read this version of the translation just because of this one point.
Best novel i have read so fare can be compared to ultimate demOn system ????????????????????????????????????????????????
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This novel is rare piece of gem that is so much different from your genetic cultivation novel where the basic plotlines are overused to the point of being annoying . It is very good despite being not popular I don't how it is not popular though. despite it being a comedy novel (probably ) it has good background with interesting characters that if the author seriously try to make cultivation novel he can do it. most of all the misunderstandings in the novel is really so much that you even forget that there is plothole.this novel is way too hilarious
This is an amazing book the only thing that is lacking is the writing quality everything else is 5/5. It so funny, bloody, and they have an actively ruthless MC, unlike those stories that say the MC is ruthless but leave people alive so that they can come back to kill the MC. The author also listens to the readers and reply, unlike some authors who don't even bother to look at the comments. The character all have unique aspects about themself and the world background is very good. I am also not saying that his writing is lacking to be mean I am just giving an honest review. The author is not a professional. I will write another review when the time calls for it so please don't hate me. :)
I know i keep putting MID on all your chapters but its out of love XD anyways pretty good actually so good job sir apparently you have to fill thiswelpcool
It was so great! Loved the characters, brilliant story. I didn’t want to put it down! Author writes with a deceptively simple style, meaning the narrative flows naturally and quickly, yet takes you effortlessly over rocky terrain.