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My heart bled for Pete. She is good, why did she have to die?
Will there be more chapters?
Daphne fell in love first with Craig and thought she knew everything there was to know about love but then fell hard for Cara. What would happen next? If your world seems to go crazy? Who are you gonna choose? The one you think is right? or what your heart really does desire?
Incompleted
Where are the new chapters ..very slow update
Loved the book
I enjoyed reading this story. I love Austin! His love is so pure. But I don't think Payton deserves his love. She is a big flirt! Kissing Roman an hour ago and kissing Austin after a few minutes then.
interesting
I love it! I really want to read more. But the coins are too expensive XC Now I have to wait.... ? Keep up the good work author! I support you and your work with all my might! Good luck! And know that there is someone that enjoys your story ?? Love it!
Loved this one! Riveting storyline that keeps you hooked! I coulsn’t stop reading!
I have absolutely loved this journey with Adrian and Aria. Congratulation Layana, on the completion of your fist book. I look forward to following you on your future ones.. Well done!
Okay so this opening hits different because the author doesn't waste time with exposition dumps. Feng Moxi wakes up in a dark cell, body broken, and the reader immediately understands she's been through hell. The reveal that she's been reborn—back to one week after the apocalypse starts, inside someone else's frail body—isn't just a trope checkmark, it's loaded with immediate tension. She was betrayed, eaten alive by mutated beasts, and now she's back at square one with nothing but memories and a mysterious bead. The pacing here is genuinely tight. Chapter 1 establishes the setting, the threat, the betrayal, and the rebirth all within a few thousand words. Then Chapter 2 drops the spatial artifact reveal and Chapter 3 introduces the cultivation system. That's three major plot milestones in three chapters and none of it feels rushed because every scene is doing double duty—advancing the plot AND deepening character. The subplot of the other kidnapped girls adds texture without slowing things down. Wang Bing dragging a girl away for the night is a brutal reminder that time is running out. But here's what I'm wondering: the bead chose her blood to activate, and there's a sword inside that rejected her because she's too weak. Is the sword going to be a companion entity, or just a power-up? And what's the deal with Wan Wanxin never using this sword in the previous life—does that mean the bead was dormant for her, or that she simply didn't know how to unlock it?
