Really love the book! I hope you continue it, i cant wait for more!
Mhmmm... It's completely MTL, I can't even understand who's talking sometimes... There are many transmigrators and systems hosts... The book is confusing me too much... (My review)
Definitely a must read to all of you. The main character, Josh Malum, can differentiate what's good and evil. His action contains, logic and reasoning, that explains on why he does that sort of thing. The author was able to create a nice balance of his character. He is not a perfect character that doesn't make any mistake. The world building is somewhat solid, it explained the different types of sector the humans live in. The place he currently resides still contains some mystery. As far as I know is that there is a tower and that after exiting the tutorial he came to a place filled with advanced technology. It's definitely not earth and I will wait for the author to explain what is the secret of that place. Who were the first humans who were able to establish a colony and thrive. Thank you, keep up the good work.
alright so far so good, the mc doesn't seem like a weakling like the MC of Immortal in a reverse world or something, anyway for people who haven't read it yet I wouldn't say it's Ground Breaking but it is Decent...for how long will it stay like that is the question tho.Oh and don't bother about those low reviews it's clear there just dissatisfied that the mc is not the one being conquered, but I mean c'mon what did you expect?This is webnovel the land of the Horni's if you want something like that look somewhere else
I have already written a review for this whole batch and ranked them by themselves, however this will just be a ranking for all novels in 1 review. This will be copied to all novels on this batch so don't worry.1) Pet Simulator2) Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation3) Maximum Comprehension: Taking Care of Swords In A Sword Pavilion4) My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly5) Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives6) Aiding My Queen With My SystemThis isn't an opinion this is a fact. Kekekekek
It's reincarnation similar to others but it has unique way of delivering it. It also has the same vibes of Moonlight Fantasy with a little (World's best assassin isekai) in terms of the Goddess.
Review that EVERYONE going into this story should read. With the emergence of the whole otome and villian webnovel/lightnovel genre, readers in the audience come with certain expectations. You expect a whole academy, a kingdom or what not. No, its not that this novel doesn't have that similar stuff. But as of this review which is the max chapters (40ish), the whole story is very different to what one would expect from coming in. The novel's world building, the amount of POV changes just for 1 particular scene, the slow pacing, the amount of exposition, the amount of deepness really suggests that this world powers will be as large as a CULTIVATION novel (Multiverse/universal level confirmed). All of this makes the novel feel quite heavy to read. This is definitely not your typical slice of life rom com novel you would expect. Speaking of comedy, there was almost none of that and its very serious (though I expect it to come during the academy arc). About 20 chapters + that's when the story starts becoming less expository and heavy, but the qualities this novel have are still there. Not to mention, the story feels very shounen (tra*sh to strong) but on a seinen level of maturity (18-40 males). Lots of introspection to add to that. Thus, this novel's content is definitely not for everyone catered to this genre. It's a super big world and a serious take on the genre. If you cannot handle this, then I do not suggest picking it up because even the chapters feel long themselves. You probably won't be able to survive the first 25 chapters or so. END OF REVIEW FOR EVERYONE TO READ. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- REVIEW THAT YOU CAN READ IF YOU WANT TO. Now I will go into some thoughts I personally have for the novel. Writing linguistic- I was surprised to hear that the author is NOT a native. Because the English in this novel is quite good. The grammar and punctuation itself barely had any problems for webnovel standard. The most common mistake was commas where they shouldn't be. Even though fiction writing can exempt some things, half of what shouldn't there are plain mistakes. If there is an improvement, that would be to make it more flowery and better immersion. But that's difficult to do and I'm basically talking about the actual bookstore publishing level. In other words, as a webnovel quality it is satisfactory. However, I do suggest to tone down the POVs for new characters and keep in mind it will slow scenes down in the novel. Especially coming into the novel, I was overwhelmed. I can't imagine how it would be for a non-native. Story development: Overall, because of its pacing its pretty good. Things are slowly fleshed out and not rushed at all. But one can easily imagine the downsides. If you read the above its not hard to find the consequences. I say its pretty good, but that's because I was able to somehow keep my retention and understand it. Some would REALLY Hate it because of how much content and expository is smashed in your face. It really reminds me of reading Earth's Greatest Magus (One of the all-time top stories on Webnovel). Thus for some people the story development can be very bad.Characters are very good and developing well. I like the main ones so far and heavily look forward to them. The author with his POVs shows that he takes care in presenting them as 3D. Although if I had to be critical, they pale compared to a book-store level (they feel more like characters than humans). But on a webnovel level, very good and enough. World Background- As large as a cultivation novel. Expect 600 chapters + at minimum. That's what it feels like. -------------- Conclusion: It's a novel that can potentially be one of the top novels on this site. It's definitely a hidden gem. I hope this novel becomes at least one of my top 10 favourite novels on this site because it really does feel like it will become one. Every review of mine now ends with me wanting to ship. Oh wait... 40 chapters and with its pacing and lack of heroines I really can't. There's only 1 heroine really that we seen so far (a few? maybe have appeared but just brief). Author I beseech you to create a romantic drama! I wish for at least a strong heavy, dramatic love triangle at the minimum. (Think Oregairu and White Album 2). Harem in the sense of multiple girls interested around mc is preferred. Not in the sense of polygamy and such. You can write realistic characters and hopefully no ruin of story with sm*t. With your story, sm*t scenes should be used to really show that their relationship has extended to this level of LOVE. Not lus*. 1-2 wives is what I like: Love is war. I want to ship! And enjoy the anticipation of my ship sailing or sinking. And the heart wrenching drama that unfolds. Not everyone gets a happy ending. Liu vs the Villainess. Doesn't this love triangle sound great if you focused on them? One's an ice cold beauty, another is an apathetic villainous. We don't need other heroines! Imagine the dynamic interactions. Wouldn't it be so interesting? I would love it if you would do this. They are probably so similar too. You can play around the Mc's taste and that's why he feels great affection for both; however, struggles to choose as they're similar. Ofc its more complex than that but its stuff you can work around with for the complexity of romantic relationships. Awesome novel. Keep it up!
at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.
This novel is trash.There are so many plot holes and the plot doesn't even make any sense.The mc is very arrogant and braindead and the other characters exist only to worship mc.There is no world background or character growth.I won't recommend it at all.I don't know how this kind of novel even got picked up.
another brain dead mc. I only read the free chapters but I bet when all those big shots show up and they all probably call him senior and this idiot mc still won't figure it out.
If you want to read this then I advise for you to turn off your brain and just skim through this trial novel.. It contains simp MC, stupid MC, and MC always complaining about the system.Sidenote: MC after receiving the system becomes stupid and becomes a mindless simp...Writing Quality ★ ★ ★• Translation is great not like the previous trial novels which are basically worse than MTL..Story Development ★• Wish fulfillment novel, MC got a system by having cold, he gave a pill to his "ugly" classmate and when he saw the face under the hair, he was enlightened and became a simp. He ate a super brain pill and made the teacher dumpfounded.Character Design ★• It's a meh, imagine giving an adult a phone and they didn't know how to use it, instead of figuring it out they just cry and complain... ChildishUpdsting Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★• Nothing to say hereWorld Background ★• Just China...
Damn why you make the main character seem weak at times dude lowkey supposed to be strong as **** he used to be stupid strong in his other life’s soWhy does he struggle so much against everyone