Is it too very unfair to ziming so many guy likes pei ge .not just like but obsess ..my gosh ND pei ge is so so idiot..don't make it too hard 4 ziming ..
/Comment may contain spoiler/Ah what a nice novel~~~I really like how each arc has something new prepared. I especially liked arc 3 4 ah~Though there had also been some I didn't even read(specifically arc 6 7) (*´∇` ) Had especially wished for one or two more worlds with a Fantasy-like setting. But all in all, it was quite good ah~Liked it that they still went back to the two unfinished worlds and completed the plot ヾ(＾-＾)ノ
The novel is good, different from other cultivation novels. Hopefully the author has the motivation to continue updating his novel and hopefully the novel will just be left behind
Rather interesting story that suffers a lot from poor writing quality. Story would benefit a lot if it followed the standard dialogue format instead of this abomination that it currently has. It also has wrong spelled names and misused pronouns that is pretty common in this platform. Anyway if
you can get past those story has potential.
This is it...this is the book that made me have a liking to Harem...I love the way each of the female characters are not felt like they r left outLove your work Seraph??
I finally found a good novel, I was tired of unreadable novels written by bots, thank you.
really good start. continue the good work!!
I'm usually a silent and low-key reader, but I just had to review this. It's so enthralling. Just recently joined Webnovel on recommendation and on recommendation I read your other novel and was so mesmerized. I saw u had another novel and decided to check this out. And Omg! Keep it up bro. I wanna see the end of this✌✌
This Novel needs some serious re writing. It is a classic example of someone writing a story synopsis to match a writing competition and still trying to make the synopsis/MC backstory seem relatable and exciting, only to then realize that it was a load of trash and will cripple the progress of their story as they don't know how to properly integrate the components.
The author thus has a very thick face, makes many, many contradictory statements and events. MC winds up unrelatable and unrealistic considering his past.
Case in point, the back story of the MC does not line up with his actions, he should have barely read anything in that huge library because a) it was huge, B) he was fighting for his life and recources all the time, c) he was a young man. He had neither the time nor mental acuity to digest the library's contents. In the authors own words the MC was average.
Other than the bare necessity of Mana cultivation knowledge he should know nothing about alchemy, because a) in his original time there were next to no alchemy resources and thus no need to waste time on 'useless learning' , B) he would have little to no time to practice and experiment, which as even the author states, is absolutely necessary.
In short this story is pushed ahead by its release date and general lack of glaring spelling and Grammer errors, thanks to some decent editors. Unfortunately they as well fail in the prime editing directive, which is to do more than just correct spelling and Grammer. A piece of software can do that much, they fail to correct the terrible inconsistencies found in this novel. This novel is a symptom of the worst of webnovel's glamour.
And yet simply changing the MC from a 20 year old youth when he died to a 100-200 year old veteran wizard who had the time to absorb decent amounts of misc knowledge from the library turns the whole paradigm on its head. Will it require a lot of rewriting, yes. But it needs to happen nonetheless.
In short, if the author want his novel to be anything more than a trashy joke then they need to seriously consider the overall novel balance and scope, otherwise this novel will slowly throttle itself to death in a mire of tangled and increasingly convoluted and contrived plots.
When I look at video games novels I think of entertaining and exhilarating things. This story starts off nicely, setting a good tone for the story. Not much info dump, but we still get to learn a thing or two about the protagonist. The writing style is good, with well-chosen words and expressions. So far it was really enjoyable. Keep up the good work! <333
Never thought I'd see a reverend insanity copy, with the self cultivating abilities trope, Chinese author's are truly shameless uncreative copying b*sard's
interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. im so excited with this book. this book is literally good and very easy to understand, can't wait to continue reading this book