Good story but greedy author and app developers, it costs 2 fast pass per locked chapter or starts out at 15 coins then increases every chapter afterwards not sure what they are thinking. So many translation errors in grammar and gender nouns it is annoying. suggest making all locked chapters a set price of 10 coins per developers need to give coin rewards as check in, reading etc. if you want a free reading app go to my topia
It's worse than MTL quality past 200+ chapters. Even a single sentence is a struggle to comprehend. I really tried but it's just impossible for any sane person to make heads or tails off it. Too bad, I was starting to enjoy the novel. Maybe I'll give it a try again if the Author does something about the 300+ incomprehensible chapters.
After what happened with "Dual Cultivation".....the mention of Su Yang leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
I love this book. because there is no harem or anything, it’s more about the actual story. and it has a great concept.
The world-building is great and pretty solid, but something feels off. The crazy female lead, for instance, makes me wonder if she'll start engaging in NTR or create her own harem. Also, they've created this game world, yet they describe it as if the whole world is their enemy. On top of that, the story is really slow, with a lot of filler, in my opinion.
It shows promise:)…………………………………….(dont know what els to say)
I had my fill, can't wait to read more chapter. Author thank you for this book?❤
it has the potential to rise, hut I'm enjoying it rn
"A thoughtful and engaging narrative that explores complex themes
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the need for editing shows but not to an extent that makes it painful.I don't understand why an actual storyline only shows in stories/novels that are not tragedy and anger/stress inducing. so the so called "good" stories honestly do not make the reader relax or experience much happiness during the read.this story has some of the worst lack of parental recognition off looks alone. feel free to correct me. the curse makes him easier to hate. then the only official changes are color changes in hair and eyes. somehow his parents never seem to notice the clone like looks with different hair and eyes because his attitude and stupid plot.as is a norm. adults are really a backdrop and a prop for stories while kids, teens and late teens are the ones that contribute the most.honestly. overall, I'm just mad.yo mbeutcha!i remember the confidence you put in the reply to my comment where i mentioned the need to know when i would find a satisfactory resolution to the tortured life of the mc, i wasn't here for continued tragedy. but lookey lookey! there's no record of such a comment so I must be a troll right?!you said it would all be worth it.the bitter-"sweet" ending and the parental relations "resolution" was worth it?maybe to you. and all the tragedy loving "it's such a good story" community.you're a disgusting narcissist. yup I'm biased and mad at you and hope i ruined your day with my tantrum.satisfactory??not by a long shot. your note in the epilogue showed sincerity instead of confidence. my response would've been different had you used sincerity or even no response at all.
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