The concept is interesting, the MC gets turned into a soulless object, not that soulless though. Never seen anything in that direction but I really enjoyed it. It feels interesting and somewhat fresh. But I feel like there are some other words you can use or typos but that's just a tweak for someone like me. I like the story and hope you will not stop writing!
1-慕少你的马甲掉了(Mu Shao, your vest is off)-310 CH READLINK-https://69shu.net/3/3802_17/#all"Rebirth Space: Mu Shao, spoil the heavens! 》 (Sweet Pet, Shuangwen) In the previous life, she was designed to have a one-night stand with the school grass to have an abortion. When she was born again that night, she got space to start planting delicious vegetables and fruits, valuable herbs, opening online stores, doing live broadcasts, writing articles, scumming men and women, and regaining a happy family ... and she became a well-known author and anchor After founding an internationally renowned food brand, he found out that Xiao Baozi's father is different? ? "Mushao, do you actually watch the live broadcast? Who is she?" Someone smiled, "My wife!"
This story seems to be a slice of life in a cultivation world. Story progress is quite slow and the daily life stuff is just too detailed. By chapter 20 I had already started skipping blocks of text looking for dialogs. By chapter 30 (raws) the skipping got larger and by 40 I could no longer continue. It's just too boring.....
Both the story title and synopsis are misleading. The correct title should be ‘Smut Divine System.’ The novel is more about *** and less about the struggle against protagonists. Maybe it will change in the future, given that it’s still in its infancy stage. Who knows.
The story is completely unreadable, even mtl have better translation quality, at this point i’m even doubting if this novel is translated to a different language and not english because with this translation quality it’s like reading in a completely different language.I dare the translator to try to read it and tell me if he can understand anything written??, i very much doubt it.I’m not really sure if the story is good or not as the translation is unreadable.I DO NOT RECOMMEND THIS, IT IS TERRIBLE.The translator needs to be fired.
Check-in novel. As the synopsis says, don't expect any sort of tension, hardship or anything else that may even vaguely elicit an emotional response from you. You can read this entire story from start to end without feeling a single shred of emotion. Is this a new guiness world record? Probably...
Meh, too long winded. took eight chapters to do something that could easily be achieved in three. Other than that, story’s pretty good but still wont bother seeing how it develops
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Thank you for posting this on here even finding it online is becoming difficult. If you have them, post more chapters please
just don't drop okk........and add Hollywood in the mix as well otherwise the views won't be high..... add Hollywood tag or add Hollywood to the story name
I REALLY think that the reason for having so few votes its because the art of the cover, it gives the vibe of being too flowery, not eye catching enough? idk but with a longer synopsis and a better art cover it might RISE, I really hope so, I mean the translator and editor seems like they are very hard/working and it may be a shame for them to not be able to bring us this story that looks promising, I also think that they have put a LOT of effort on this project. This is my sincere opinion, I may be wrong though...