It sounded more like a threat than a warning but it was all I was willing to do. In the end, I don't think she'd live longer with her dad's ambition. Sad.
I reloaded the pistol and fired at the group. I did not even try to shoot the mage, only people around. Behind they managed to react three feel dead .
Truly, even a town in the middle of nowhere like this, there was still those working in this trade, was there even a place that is deemed safe in the entirety of the kingdoms?
colbob was super annoied,
Its a new novel, with some admittedly cliche tropes, but so far it's interesting with an intriguing plot/mc
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Why do you have my name in your book hahaha
This book is good!!! All we need now is consistent updates
The writing is great. The pacing could benefit from some improvement, but it’s mostly good.Story development however takes a toll on the writing. So far the story is a shallow description of her day-to-day activities. No much detail is presented besides a plain "she had some trouble, but overcame it".This also makes the character feel a bit shallow, because it limits the possibility of understanding and relating to her on a deeper level.World background is well done, considering the writing style and story depth. It’s enough to further explore and contextualize the world.It would be great to have more details on Emily's daily life.Keep up the good work, author!
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Will it be a harem ? I hope so as I am a man of culture
notbad its interesting but please elaborate more. its to straightforward was looking forward to the first cultivator concept not its bad but can be improved (chapter21) :)