I absolutely love this stories slow world building! Please please please keep going!!!! I also really loved how real and smart the characters are. Tackling problems very logically.
Ive read the first few chapters, and the story is great, but i fell like i know too much ybout the lore of LOL to enjoy this novel, especially bringing in a girl called Misha, is like inviting trouble, especially when Aatrox or Zoe ever apear in that story, or the thing with Shyvanna, i understand that the story changes a few things, but turning a half dragon in a beautiful lady seems kinda off, especially regarding the amount of realism Yummi, Rek'sai and Garen got. And its already kinda setting bad flags incase Lux should ever become part of the story
Please keep updating; how can I get in contact with you, Broyles?I like this translation, and sadly, there are only 19 chapters; I wish one day I could see this book published in English.
Eh.. I guess the story is nice? This is the author’s first time writing, I guess. There are a lot of beginner mistakes but he seems to want to improve and learn so I think people should give him a try and help whenever they can. One meaningful comment can help. But, since I know how people are here, I doubt I’ll see a lot of that. It will probably be hate and condemnation. But, at least some people who like this novel will try and help the author. I wish him luck. I didn’t read a lot so this could be counted as a spam review since I didn’t say anything meaningful.
For me to give it a five star! It means I LOVE IT! I'm the worst of all picky readers and I know it so please, if you have been thinking of reading it then get down to business and if you have not been... common give it a try I swear you would not regret it...And It's the character development for me... such a wonderful story, I swear word can't even describe what I want to say
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We'll,from what I had read in review,this novel is definitely **** since only a reader will know another reader....Haters or not,it's all plain in our eyes....Not that this is bad,no...It's just not our cup of tea...So author guy,although I haven't read and most probably will not,I sincerely wish you good luck....Write everything you want,it's yours after all....Don't mind the critique since what you love may be what people hate.....So,just pour out your idea and chapter,someday you will find a great fans....Since old saying,another man trash is another man treasure...Keep it up,ignore the bad critique unless you are an M...
I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint
I don't know anything so I'm rating it as 5 stars. I want to read it but it seems as though this has been dropped.
Well-made. novel.Little to no writing errorsThe plot progresses smoothlyAnd just me being honest here, but I don't like romance-related novels. They just feel cringy. However, this novel still have be grasped onto it. Still haven't read the full thing. going to finish it off now. Keep up the great work author!!
Music is the food for soul and the soul of this master is a glutton. A novel without music is lika an Oreo without the cream, it taste good but it feels like there's something missing. Nuf said
The first part had alot of descriptions, but aside from that its all good, The world is variedThe characters are goodAnd the mc is, not sure at the moment, but ill add when i do.