Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please do something about it Also THE ORIGIN SYSTEM ON OTHER SYSTEM REQUIRED is too good .Keep up the good work also increase the post rate if possible.
Amazing novel and I love the fact that things build up to the point where he gets betrayed. If you can tolerate ntr then this novel is practically a godsend. Good job dude.
So far amazing but lol everytime is just like oh cool oh cool oh cool every single time we find something new about him each time as he gets more and more op seriously but still its a really fun novel to read so yeah keep up the hard work man
Hello! Author here, I'm currently starting to edit the chapters beginning from that start for any typos, mis-gendering, and such. There have been many kind people to point out the mistakes so I could edit it but reading my own work from the start still revealed minor ones.Anyway, there would be no changes to the story whatsoever from me doing this and this is just an update to tell everyone that I'm aware of the mistakes made and I 'm starting to correct them. However, if you still spot more, please do tell me and I will update them at the earliest.Thanks for reading and see you next chapter ^_^A comment for your thoughts or a review would really help me a lot!Discord Server Link:https://discord.gg/3JstDAVMy Discord:Sky2316#9623
Hi Chiamaka, I need to chat with you privately.
can't wait to read more
Cool! Adventure to the portal of the painful past, which is supposed to prepare a strong mentality to accept reality. Hi Aiden and Layla, may good fortune be with you!
Loved this book!!!
Repetitive. Chapters are like two pages. Never ending.
realmente hermoso
Loved it can’t wait for the next book
writer just moved back to the 9 mainland. wonder how many days before the writer gets back to Darryl and what is going on with him.