Writing Quality: Can’t really find anything that is unreadable or annoying just some minor mistakes every 50chps
Update stability: 2 Chps a day can’t get much better than that
Story development: has kept me intrigued and interested as of ch236 and planing constantly reading further
Charcter Design: feels a little basic but the whole point is it’s supposed to be like a Chinese novel so it makes sense
World Background: extremly good probably the best part of this novel the author has made a great foundation for further exploration.
Overall: great book, good read hope to see further development and progress.
Anon what is there not to love in this psychopatherratic ☑ psychopath ☑ wants to conquer from within ☑ loves to KILL ☑ and more plus the author's steady updates ☑ ☑ ☑ [The GIF is for the author]
Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.
I read till chapter 72, and i think i can't go further . When i started reading this , i had high hopes.
The reasons were :
- The pretty good writing( nothing revolutionary but definitly better than most books out there.)
- The many possibilities of developement for the plot
- The fact that the transition from a cowardly character to a confident one for the Mc was well done.
- Although this novel takes some elements of another( bloodline system, which is not so great either) , it slowly finds its own way.
- The other voice of the system which added a layer of mystery .
But that was all. And some point, as time goes by, one find himself/ herself unable to continue because some problems are too obvious to be ignored :
- The pace is horribly slow.
It is not a bad thing per se . However when NOTHING substential happens to the Mc , it just makes the book boring.
- What is even the Mc 's motivation?
So far i don't see one. Him not having any clear ambition makes it so he doesn't go beyond the " i'm an author's good idea " to become a " i'm an author's good idea who works because I FEEL REAL " . Harry is an Mc because the author made him so. If he was a side character in some other book , People wouldn’t even care about him , because he is not interesting.
This applies to other characters as well. So far , none of them seems a little bit interesting or real.
- The story doesn't progress and it feels like there are no dangers or difficulties for the Mc(A competition is approaching but there's no tension at all ). The world building isn't doing much better , as it is nothing new and we don't even know that much about the world yet.
- The author's writing is also a problem.
Although the grammar and the vocabulary are good( it's nothing extraordinary but it's better than most of the novels on this app), the author has a serious issue with emotions.
The tension, the fear , the sadeness... it's like the author has troubles showing emotions. It is not so evident in the earlier chapters. But as one goes further , it is more and more glaring.
That's why every interactions feels so inconsistent and not relatable at all.
Besides , i myself do not like it when the Mc dwells on sadness and regrets. But the author could have shown at least that Harry( even though he said the contrary) deep down, cares for his family. It should have been shown( or told ) a bit that it hurts him that they didn’t even searched for him when he moved out .
What i mean is that the author could have add some complexity to the characters' emotions which would help making them appear real and human-like.
Moreover, the chapters aren't that long .
72 chapters appears to be a lot but it isn't ( for that book).
Overall, this novel isn't bad but just average . I'm so disappointed because so much more could have been done .
a perfect story telling ,the story building is so attractive
The story is great and all, but it could use work. And hoping to see the author bring out its potential throughout the episodes he will have. Most importantly I wish for the author to use a better Cover for this book because a good cover will surely hook readers and their interests.
Pretty cool. Ilike the characters and the plot. Both are really cool. This novel has a lot of potential so i'm looking forward to reading it more
Hide is here with a new novel!I’m pretty sure that it’ll be great, he’s always great at writing, and his update frequency whoo-wee!(Ps: This review is requested in exchange of some spanking, I’m expecting now.)
author need to update this novel ????????????????? ???????????????????
Good piece of writing. I'm hooked into reading this. It is carefully drafted and the synopsis is eye catching. Can't wait for more updates. Keep doing you.
The synopsis is quite interesting and catchy. The story plot is great and the writing style is well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
This is the novel I’ve been waiting for. I am so excited for this novel and where the story arcs. I hope Webnovel picks up this novel. The translation and spelling are well done.