although I don't read books alot but I got this free session and I started reading this book , its' promising and enjoyable to read , the authors's new and if you see his later chapters there's clear improvement in writing and story , it's got potential , hope the author brings goes like this and keep this book ongoing .
I read this bc u Iput it under the category no-harem ???
Nice novel the author recommended me this himself and it is great . Waiting for more chapters .....
the Grammer is so terrible that it's absolutely impossible to read...but ironically if you can get past that the stories "flow" is better then some native English speaking authors. the author does have a talent for writing, however, they need a dedicated proofreader or editor.
Writing quality is great the story is interesting but aT least update this novel fast you are updating 4 chapters Per week at least increase The chapters per week.Story development is great I can not say any thing about world building right now And I like reading this novel great work and please release chapters faster.
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Really love the way you craft and immerse readers into the action, allowing our emotions to be in sync with the MC in fighting the plague which really looked like a doomsday scenario. Love it! Waiting for more!
Currently, this is my favourite novel.Give it a chance, you will not regret it
Well it is a good novel but there Is one thing this author mc always have in all his novel a perfect mc but when it come to girls they we be completely useless and the r18 chapter in this novel is just rubish mc mistakenly touch a girl breast and the author is putting warning r18 trash another wasted time.
Quite the good story and the characters and their interactions and growth are pretty much the highlights. From what I could read I would reckon the story is about disruption, about how the protagonist's mere existence and knowledge can have a profound effect on the world he's been transmigrated to. The author's take on a world where magic exists and it's implications for human society is one of the most realistic depictions of it. Basically a society where magical eugenics is the overarching influence on all walks of life and how extremely rigid and hierarchical the divide between classes. Although the world building is not up to par with only a few snippets and descriptions of the world's history, cultures and races which doesn't leave a lot in feeling immersed to the setting. Though I assume the author will mitigate it when we reach the kingdom building arc hopefully. The writing and structure of the story are good with the rare spelling and grammar mistakes. Names, places and terms are consistent although some of the chapters are mostly dominated by the perspective of a single character. But they are written where it's clear who's talking and who's who so you don't really get confused from the dialogue. The technical aspects of the magic system being described are easy to understand and also the scientific concepts being applied are also clear.So far it's been a marvelous experience to read it and I can't wait for the succeeding chapters. And how the protagonist carries himself into this new world. Thank you author for bringing your story to life and I hope you continue writing this until the end.
hi for the author and the readers.superb story
the rest of your stories are amazing so I put this 5 star here to celebrate another great story.