What makes this novel great in my opinions is the relationsship between the senior and junior. She obviously cares so much for him because of the life she lived prior to reincarnating and he's OP now because of the system but I don't know is he is the same person just w/o the system in her memories.
I am in love so far and I hope to see more in the future.....................................................................................
Very underrated novel. It has its faults but the author’s originality and creativity makes it one of the best wish fulfillment novels I ever read.
I think this story has a lot of potential. Key points to look out for:1) use of dialogue, think you could Make use of more dialogue. the entire story is written in Lincolns thoughts with sparse use of dialogue. 2) character development: The story is too focused on Physical development and has ignored much of lincolns mental development3) world sEtting: the entire transition to rocks Pirates, the worlD government, strength levels are not too clear Even with the auxiliary chapter4) Story pace: reading just the first few chapters, it Already the gives the feeling that the story will end in 10-15 chapters max. You want to make sure you have a modest goal in terms of how long this fanfic will be and pace yourself to achieve that goal
Yet another GT novel here...... Come on qidian atleast get a decent novel... You see none of the latest novel taken from other sites or newly translated have a higher rank on novel updates... It feels like qidian is uploading ONLY TYPICAL DRAMA AND PREDICTABLE novels....
hlo author can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillersand these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count
I so can't wait for the updates!! This Writer is just so good...!
This is so underrated.
Its a good book. Its so nice to read
why it's take a long time to update the story two or three chapters in a week
The camera. The camera is EVERYTHING in this section and I keep coming back to it. Raymond gives Jolene his Canon EOS 1000F—already loaded with film, because of course he thought of that detail. And Jolene immediately understands what he's doing. She's not just taking photos for fun; she's building an evidentiary record for CPS. But the text frames it as something more tender: "kids grow up so fast. If you don't take lots of photos while they're little, by the time they're grown, you'll forget what they looked like as children." That line about forgetting what they looked like as children—ouch. Because Raymond's parents are dead. He knows exactly what it feels like to lose the visual record of someone's childhood. When he says "When my parents were alive, they used to take lots of photos of Ben too," the weight of that is devastating. He's sharing something vulnerable with Jolene, and she doesn't know how to respond to vulnerability, so she just says "I'm sorry to hear that" and changes the subject to photography. The photos become a motif for memory itself. Every snapshot—Emma on the swing, Ben at the piano in the sunset glow, the three of them doing homework on the floor, the bedtime selfie—is an act of resistance against forgetting. Against loss. Against the idea that childhood disappears without a trace. And then there's the meta-layer: Jolene is also building a narrative record through her novel. Maria Costa's story is being written down, preserved, given meaning. Both the photos and the novel are attempts to say: this happened, this mattered, this person existed. The author is really asking: what do we hold onto when the people we love are gone? For Raymond, it's photos. For Jolene, it's both photos and words. And for Ben, it's apparently the voice of someone reading to him at bedtime—even if he'd never admit it out loud.
Cant wait to read more