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5 Stars!!! It's basically Overlord but with a WW2 theme. There are some sections that are in spanish and have a lot of text gibberish. But a part from that it's a ok story!
I was really I trusted by the book and it was good all up until he brought the girl along. At this point the charcte has been “ asleep” for thousands of years if not hundreds of thousands of years. So at that point with all th suffering he has gone through basically torture I would think he would be an emotionless person literally after all he has gone through. But for certain people I would say it is a good book ,got to chapter 24. But sorry author the girl ruined it for me.
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Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily.2. Stability of Updates: stable lol3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.
Story seems decent, nothing exceptional tho. Might have gotten a 3 star but the novel req payment 15 chapters in so it gets a 1 from me. So not really worth it.
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-A bit of a shaky start, but it gets better.-The chapters are longer than average. So if you saw the number of chapters and thought "Nah I want books with more chapters to binge read." don't let that be a deal breaker.Too early to say anything else, but still leaving a review so more people may find it.Best of luck, LC_Icey.
overall the book is really good and i like it a lot. i hope you keep writing and updating it I hope to read more in the future.
The principle of the book is don't be poor. And no matter the world's problems, everything can be solved with money and a little violence. And that's it. Some newspapers with daily news can provide a more pleasant reading about this reality.
After that podcast? How the hell can I not!This was just,, hilarious.Thank you. Read This!Super Entertaining. I'm waiting for the scene for when mc wishes for unlimited chips with cat girl delivery
I'm not a gamer so usually reading books about system and stuff don't make sense to me. overall the story is good and like the way it progresses