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Man, you made me remember things! Now I want to reread everything!
you mean allseer?
its disappointing how they made the divine world arc full of fighting.zzz. first he kill a few kids then the fucking imperial concubine comes?? what the fuck dude they full on made it an action filled novel when it is wholely about chef and cooking and then the fucking imperial king wont even put the concubine in a leash...wtf dude she disobeyed the fucking imperial edict its fucking treason what thw fuck is the author doing its disappointing... but the fights are good too though but wtf its on repeat beat the kid and the elder comes ...
bro, i just was about to read the but only after a few chapter the mc already planing to get a mask....what a pain should add tag hiding identity/ability, wasted my time.
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the idea is good but the novel became unbearable as I read deeper. I mean, he's the master of Fate, yet all he ever did was focus on martial arts. I literally skipped the entire Martial Arts Exams Whatever. If he wanted to be a martial artkist, he could've chosen a better roleplay not Master of Fate
I would appreciate it more if you paragraph it out, making it easier to read. Capitalisation and well other things. I basically ZOOM pass all the words, and you will understand it allGuy dies.Transmigrate, take over a "trashy" young master, in a Sect full of "perverts" hahaReceived a system to help him grow, and about this point, almost every "females" being used or used goods.Too bad ratings can't be updated? or can it. Anyway, read it as it is, or you be mind break
como segunda reseña que hare de esta novela, solo diré que el nivel de escritura se ha mantenido y ha mejorado un poquito, lo cual hace que sea una muy buena lectura, la descripción del lugar faltan un poquito como por ejemplo saber cuantos pisos tiene, cuantos apartamentos por pisos y como es la decoración de cada lugar, incluso el apartamento del Mc apenas se que tienen 2 cuartos, un cuarto oculto, los baños respectivos, una cocina y una sala, mas que hay 4 (creo?) colegios religiosos femeninos cercanos, pero es entendible ya que no es muy necesario hacer toda esas descripciones desde el comienzo de la historia, mientras que poco a poco se describa y se muestre como es el mundo de la novela esta bien, ya que tenemos el esquema básico.las escenas de limones son bastantes disfrutables y emocionante, espero con ansias todo lo que me vas a mostrar, solo diré que me gusta mucho como ha sido hasta ahora y solo puede ir mejorando si sigues así.la velocidad de liberación de capítulos es agradable y solo motiva a uno a estar pendiente cada día de cuando liberaras cada capitulo.algo que falta un poco es en la descripción del MC. aunque en lo personal es opcional hacerlo ya o después.no se que tienes planeado para cada detalle así que solo diré. espero sorpresas de las buenas y gracias por el esfuerzo.(después de leer mas de 20 capitulo desde mi ultima reseña)
20 chapters - read doneSo it's pretty cliche, have bad comedy, op mc, a simple minded(stupid) mc.No harem tag but every girls fall in love with him and will get by his side even if didn't do anything.Conclusion : it's your usual cultivation novels ...... ( still better than the other trash trial read but still bad)
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