Nalumntz
An intriguing plot, please update often!
Nice to read. Good vibes on relationship between them..
When is this book updated?
I love the book
Interesting Work. Can't wait to read the next chapters cos I'm hooked already
Loved it! Appreciated a complete, short and sweet plot that was well written:)
It was amazing and really eye catching. Prologue was nicely written to attract the readers. The writing style and world background is nicely created......... All in all, it's amazing......... Very good work Author......
this story feels intence ,
could be great. talented writer. so far no updates??
Enjoying the book. Waiting for more updates
poor Leila, it is horrible to discover that your worst enemy is your destined mate. I am really hooked on this story.
Somehow, it’s really funny? Even though the narrator speaks quite plainly, it still makes me laugh. For instance, this line: "Who am I to be blamed for my poor test scores?" The MTL style uses short, simple sentences, but I feel it fits the story perfectly. The narrator is exactly what you’d expect from this genre, yet she also seems emotionally detached. I think it’s the way she describes her feelings.
In one scene, she’s being pinned down by three upperclassmen and bullied. Her response is to casually note that she’s afraid. This dissonance is jarring, but not in an unpleasant way. That’s the essence of this novel.
This is a typical love story, but with a not-so-typical girl. The characters are deeper than I anticipated. It’s not a grand narrative, but it’s touching in its simplicity. In the end, I dropped it, but I don’t regret picking it up.
