The Rift Jumper Book 1: Jump

Fk author why are you crossing the line, making him worse for what purpose???

I only have two things to say about this ending: WTF?? IS THIS SERIOUS??

To the admins, I hope you can edit the following chapters. Thank you so much! Ch. 20 part 3 - wrong format/spacing Ch. 22 to 23 - repeating/similar chapters Ch. 23 - repeating paragraphs (line: "of course, this time the girls would") Ch. 24 - doubled chapter 24 Ch. 25 - doubled chapter 25 Ch 26 - wrong format The rest are understandable, thank you again for the hard work!

Can u give me some advice? Im hungry for new pkemon type novels. i already read the astral pet store, panda sh*t, monster paradise. and long live summons( this one is really sh*t).

Interesting Work. Can't wait to read the next chapters cos I'm hooked already

too much of everything and not finished.  not worth reading