War & Military is my favorite type of web novel, so forgive me if I’m bias. The usage of descriptions is small, more descriptions should be added, especially for the characters. The story is a sort of fast-paced, focusing on action and speech instead of thoughts. I do indeed like this kind of style, though I’m not sure how others feel.I apologize if I made any mistakes in this review. This type of genre is a rare find, keep up the hard work Author!
I admire your creativity and imagination in writing this short story; I enjoyed the twist and plot; and I got goosebumps while reading it. I hope you write more in the future.
the story is good and it is great that the author already warned the reader or let just say he already set the expectations of readers in the level that he know the novel has and it make sense reading it knowing things.
I going to need more chapter to get my blood pumping or should I imaging the whole thing into my head which will keep going but it nice;you got this author when I am older and start my own novel it will be so much hype ! Do a great job and maybe you might bring alots of stuff for us to read like anything just keep working do not stop
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(Take my votes)>^_^> >^_^> >^_^>From childhood everyone told me you can't find ideal thing. But if this story is not ideal ,will be all novels trash?! <^_^< <^_^< <^_^<(Take my stones)
I liked the concept of the novel, it really hooked me in at the beginning because of the giant system, after 70+ chapters though i started to see more stupid decisions by characters and sped up storytelling as well as nationalism which just completely took me out of the novel.
Its back!!!! Finally!!! Just read it, its good!!!?(Wrote email to devs and then in same week we get 275 chapters after at least 6 months of no updates. Coincidence, I think not)
didn't gave review in a long time about the story it's very good other than making the mc rely on the system but it's just happens on the starting arc's and and leaving the mc and people related to himall are chicl'e typical xianxia type.overall the story is to my liking i don't know about the others.??
loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece
This is really cool and unique.
So basically, it's a video game. But it's not. Yet the main characters NEVER make a big deal of that fact and it's just... accepted? WHAT. The first time the MC uses magic in reality is so anticlimactic and doesnt add anything to the story, even though that should be groundbreaking. I wanted to throw my phone at that point. This was the only reason I stayed for 400 chapters. Don't get invested in this book.