"But, you know Rheo masih terlalu mentah dalam urusan syarikat ni, kan? Ayden sendiri yang tengok macam mana Rheo uruskan syarikat kecil kita? Inikan dia nak urus syarikat besar tu," lembut suara Puan Besar Ratna memujuk, berharap agar anaknya memahami.
"Ya ampun Chacha sayang dia tuh cuman temen aku dan kita itu nggak lebih dari itu karena cuman kamu yang milikin hati aku"
"so first water huh... the best water in this world is Holy water and water from fountain of youth but the number is very small and only important people have it, the second best is water generated from magic, i can use such magic so you don't have to worry, but the problem is soap, i heard the same thing used by royalty for bathing"
"Hey Fatty," Nick said in a serious tone, "Mr. Baldwin seemed pretty mad that you made fun of him in front of the other students. You better watch out. Didn't you Uncle say that he couldn't have you ruining his job and that if you got the police called again....he would send you off somewhere far away to finish out high school?"
Story is about a crafter but his power doesn't come from crafting but from magic he learns from some master after he wakes up. The crafting isn't exciting or interesting. The author just say "he crafted x,y potion and sold them".He was supposed to come from a game but there is no LITRPG elements, no mana, status or anything. There aren't even levels and no explanation is given on why he can't won't learn higher level spells or why one spell is stronger than the other.Even though his avatar was a low level smurf, aparently he has equiped legendary equipment on it? Who does that? Aren't there level requirements? MC had supreme mage avatar in a game though luck? Makes no sense just like the rest of the story. He is the overpowered biggest dikus major laser supaman hero only because he is the MC and that's it, who cares about logic in storytelling. A crafter that doesn't get stronger with his items but by learning spells and blasting everyone that offends him. The crafting is just an excuse to make money and fame fast.He kills manticores, wyverns and other strong beast in one spell at the first chapters, even though he only has level 1 spells, just because the author said so, and his real enemy when he gets to a city is... you guessed it, a **** for brains YOUNG MASTER! (that later decided to kill him with the whole backing of his family because some girl rejected him)This is a copy and paste wuxia novel, poorly written and with so much faulty and cringy worldbuilding. The author has no idea how games work nor how to properly set a western/game-like magical system.This is terrible!
(Pababa na si xyrus ng hagdan ng marinig nito ang usapan ng dalawa)
Xenon:hindi bat ang sabe nyo sa akin patay na ang aking mga magulang?noong ako ay sanggol pa lamang,namatay sila dahil nabunggo sila ng isang malaking truck?yun po ang sinabe nyo sa akin Lola
Cloud let the primal essence run along his body and he paid special attention to his five senses and it was as if he had just discovered a new world that he never knew existed before he could see things more clearly than before he can now see every detail in the forest perfectly from the smallest insect on the ground to the different colors of a single feather of a bird that was flying past him.
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Carla quickly put her hand back on his head and Tobias started to scream like he was being killed.
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