straight up trash, but hey it can cure other novels that you think are bad cause this is the worst novel I've ever read. read this if you want to cure ur take on what's bad or not.
At first I got hooked by the word "sister" in the title, and in no time I search the raw of this novel to confirm what "I expect" from this novel and sure enough. The answer is
OH MY GAH! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND SO ORIGINAL THAT IT IS MAKING ME ROCK HARD. I REALLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL AND THINK THAT YOU SHOULD READ IT IMMEDIATELY.
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I WAS TOTALLY NOT PAID TO SAY THIS.
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This has been very good so far so please don't drop it and make more chapters please I really want to see how strong he gets it the later chapters
aw, my favorite genre but why there is BL, 4 is my highest skor for the apocalypse and game element so it skor don't drop by much, but sorry i'm not gonna look into it good luck with your novel tough
A very magnificent plotline. Reading the blurb I was thinking this was going to be similar to Solo levelling but I was completely wrong. The plot and the style of writing are amazing and everything is well crafted! I'd even say it's better than solo levelling!
The writing is solid. Good grammar and almost no typos.However, there are few problems I have with the story. First of all, the protagonist himself. He's, for a lack of a better word, boring. He doesn't have a solid goal; he's just drifting. He does want to earn money, but he's not super motivated to do that either. He already has as stable job as a salaryman, so he doesn't need to earn money in-game. There isn't even a major plot line as far as I can tell. So the story is not character driven nor plot driven. It feels more a slice-of-life, but there is no feel-good or enjoying-life moment. He's just grinding.Maybe it will change later and I need to read on, but it's really difficult to stay invested if the protagonist himself is not invested in what he's doing. There's nothing to root for, no overarching mission or goal.This type of story isn't bad, but not my taste. Maybe it will fit better for readers who enjoy a loose storyline, and with emphasis on completing small missions rather than big quests.Secondly, the focus seems a bit off? The title and the synopsis makes it seem like the story will focus on his development as a Halo Paladin. However, the focus is on fishing and cooking. The first few battles are skimmed, and a boss battle comes around ch 15. Everything else is just him fishing and cooking.
Only read upto 20 chapters.Story setting is not unique but author certainly gives it a twist. The very basis of the story is that the world has become a game and every human can participate in it, while MC has a gamemod set with maximum difficulty but has walkthroughs that he can follow.
The overall flow is slightly weird and lacks seriousness, the comedy aspect is not tht high , so can't really get into it. So giving it a 2 because the cheat is pure plot Armor and progession not independent of the story line, and the story is well..... kindof non-existent .
This is a very underated novel that is quite is quite similar to another novel called “I really am not the lord of demon”. Both has the MC as the owner of a bookstore and It revolves around the various misunderstandings that occur in their interactions with their other customers.
When this story gonna have new update? It's been like a year has passed since the last chapter been published. Story is good. But it does have a prequel. This is a sequel. It seems it started off with a bang and grew from there...