This might seem like a cheap rating considering I haven't started reading this yet but I feel like it already deserves one '5 Star' review for the synopsis alone. The explanation for the RPG elements IRL is phenomenal then to top it off the MC's name is Ronald. I don't know why I just love the fact that his name is Ronald. I am contemplating giving a whole other 5 star review just for that, no sarcasm.
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So far I absolutely love the story. I have been waiting for a more western light novel and I am hoping that you can give this to me. But so far so good ;).
from the synopsis alone it's feel the story will be fun and interesting, let's hope when I start reading it, it'll be good as synopsis tell
so yeah this isn't review about the novel. but review for the synopsis
The story is very good and it fills the Void the LoTPE has filled in my soul, however it is riddled with grammar errors and I sometimes have to re-read sentences to figure out what you are trying to tell me.
Overall it is a good read though- Would be better if you fixed the grammar, or spent 10 more minutes on each chapter just to read it yourself and find errors that way,
I give 1 star to stability of update because it's been 2 weeks and yet it is stuck to chapter 21. It is a great story though. I loved it so I want more
Not the best but good.Characters are knida forced and unnatural specially dialogues.
there's no build up to the story just straight to it. it feel like it was rushed and lacking foundation. it was a good concept but poor execution.
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This novel is definitely among my faves. It's up there with Mech Touch, Chrysalis, Lord of Mysteries, and I became the Pope.I wish I could lock the author up and make him keep writing, but I understand he needs to make a living. Please give this novel a chance.
This story has a unique plot and I'm rooting for it. The protagonist is also relatable and I love the writer's sense of description. Keep writing and keep up the good work. You have the potential of becoming a great author.
I like the book but.why
few chapter can you make it's in a fast rate