Legends never die...They become a part of you...Haha, just kidding. Good stuff btw. I like how you're actually building on the gaming genre. Love it!!
starting from the first chapter where the main character is an 80 year old man looking for his love, this is just an attempt to catch up on drama and this is stupid since this is fanfiction. I think new life new opportunities is a good motto. Not to mention that the main character is too strong from the very beginning and there is no feeling of overcoming obstacles. And because of the power of khaki and others, it becomes impossible to immerse yourself in the atmosphere of TDG. As an author, I may wish to learn from mistakes.
I enjoy reading cliche eastern fantasy novels, but this one was horrible. There is barely any explanation about the world background, and the story progresses way too quick.Something that would be maybe 200 chapters in King of Gods, was already done in 20 chapters here. The main character just nonchalantly becomes an alchemist (which is supposedly super rare), refines a bunch of rare pills, and sells them for millions of gold in a matter of 2 chapters. And everyone acts as if that is normal.
extremely underrated novel one of the best in the past. Translation is also pretty much prefect
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MC is f$$k too OPHe levels up like 30 times a day while other players in the game level up like 5 - 10 times per day.MC luck is crazy beyond belief There's literally no point in reading this novel since there's barely any challenge or obstacle for the character it basically reading his life story (Which is boring as f#k) The game this novel is about is made by his mom's company and sponsored by his dad's company -_-
It’s my first novel so I don’t know.But it’s a great novel.It also got me hooked.There sometimes some mistakes in spellings or grammar but I can understand what it actually meant so that’s not a big deal and I completely recommend to read It .
READ OR RUN??TRANSLATION QUALITY: Between glaring grammatical errors, names being interchanged and the structure of the novel as a whole, it creates a difficult read. The grammar is ****** which, in theory, should make for an easy and quick read, instead weakeneds the story. The simplistic style highlights all the grammatical mistakes either the author or the translators have made. To be utterly cynical, it makes no sense for there to be as many mistakes as there are due to this being written in a language that is comfortably within the compass of a 10-year-old. They either need to put in more effort, have a new team pick this up or , heck, at this point I will take a freaking editor. All the pLinKesses are making me cringe. I cry bitter hot tears every time I read certain sentences. STABILITY OF UPDATES: Personally, I do not have much of a preference on this. 10 chapters a week is neither a large amount nor a small amount. BUT, there are translators whom push out more chapters a week at a better quality then what we are reading here. If the translation was better I would be more forgiving, but due to simply mistakes I have to give them a poor rating. I am a fan of quality over quantity. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The author needs to learn how to show NOT tell. The entire plot must have been carefully outlined, which makes for an excellent foundation, but fell flat in terms execution. The only details you will get is the author waxing a poetic paragraph over certain beautiful characters' appearance. And the story so far plays out like a paint by numbers or an adventure quide: After reading to chapter 50, I found my attention slipping. I knew that A, B and C would happen and then we would see X result. Then, three chapters later, A, B and C would happen again and then X would, yet again (shocker, I know) be the result. Little to no variation. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: And then there is the narration. Because the writing is not enjoyable, the narration, in consequence, is not either. Plus, I feel extremely disconnected from the characters, especially the MC. I find myself not caring about the circumstances he finds himself in because there is no suspense. No chance of failure. Each step in Link's character progression is transparent and, worse yet, dull. But not all is a complete waste, the author appears to have written himself into a corner with the MC's ability, making him too OP early on. To counteract this, he creates a system of magic where just because the MC gains the ability to cast spells does not mean he understands the logic and process behind his magic, placing a decent damper on MC's ability. Unfortunately, this is short lived. The MC gains knowledge and understanding at an alarming rate. If you thought the game system, in which, he could purchase spells (Including Legendary, Hidden, ect.)was an OP ability, you are sorely mistaken. The MC's genius level intellect is in fact his largest cheat skill; gifting him the ability to process, plan and react to situations (some life and death), understand knowledge from the modern world he had difficulty understanding in his previous life and recall all information he so much had glanced at in his previous life (such as the forums). . . Relatable, right. Whatever. Part of what makes s successful fantasy is the reader being able to suspend disbelief. If the MC either possessed the genius level intellect OR the gaming system, not both. Both skills balance each other out and compliment each other TOO well. He has no weakness. No faults. Nothing terribly interesting. WORLD BACKGROUND: I find myself more interested in the world, the MC has been transported to the MC himself. Similar to the MC, the reader is drooped into the middle of the story, unlike the MC though we do not possess years of knowledge from gaming. Very little is explained unless the plot calls for it, then we are treated to an information dump on every single thing they hope will distract you long enough till MC's plot armour activates and Houdinis his way out of whatever situation of the week he has landed himself in. I still have little idea how powerful a level 1 is compared to a level 2 or even to a level 3 or 4. Levels are thrown out like yesterday's underwear and I am left with no proper explanation on how powerful someone really us, not just because they possessed a higher number. FINAL ANALYSIS: Run. I would walk across the desert while eating charcoal briquettes soaked in Tabasco for forty days and forty nights than have to read this novel again.
The synopsis sounds like battle through the heavens main character, who has a sealed dantian and deemed trash, which later on unsealed due to certain reason heh.? And this type of novels are so common now a day's.
ah yes finally a decent monster book it has been decades since I found a good one all the others are fools hahahahahhhahhaahhahahahahhahaahhhaaaaaaaaa
No ghoul has ever got that strong, but what happens when a ghoul kills every single living existance on its planet? Does it die from endless hunger or walk around forever?