great story the writing is just a bit choppy feels like it's stuttering
I hate , I mean I hate when children are flirted around to be a love interest. This is fiction! U can literally make them the same age. No, it’s “can’t wait till your older”. Like why pander to pedophiles! And stop with the ridiculous repetitive nonsense “blue haired boy” and such.
Traditional Authors shameless review, I hope I am pardoned.Well, this is about celestials and their true nature, an overpowered MC with a savage mind and ruthless ways (Azrael).Punished and toss down to earth, with his powers taken away now he had to get to the top again at any cost.He was the God that kills Gods, the underlyingGod, Azrael.Well, that will be all, check it out and comment your thoughts, thank you.
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First thing I like about this book is the fact that it's really fast paced. I'm on Chapter two but I can already feel the action. There are no lengthy, insignificant details. Everything is just straight to the point. Considering the fact that I'm not really into fantasy but this book managed to capture my attention me, I'll recommend and say this is a good book!
I'm looking forward to the adventure, okay?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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it's really amazing work hope it lasts until it's finished..???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Well done author, you've written a quite splendid book here. I'm impressed, color me surprised you big cunt. When you told me to read your book, I thought it'd be shitty but big up you???✌️
Layla is a delight and Mary is a menace to come by. I wonder what else will happen
wow guys. I really recommend that you read chapter 46 up to the latest, this author upgraded his work... even though it's premium, I'm sure that's what you get
this could be the start of something or nothing..can't wait too find out