KatyS
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
Not gonna lie! every chapter make you more curious about what would happen next, love the plot and story twists, updating stability on point, story development just WOW ❗ ?
I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
I'm kind of liking the way it's going. It's always fun to read about MC's who aren't in human forms anymore, so this one has peaked my interest. The only downside is the translation and editing. So far there have been some decent chapters, but a lot of them just kind of ruin the flow of the reading by trying to figure out what they wanted to convey or just they way they wrote it. Some people said that WuxiaDream are the translators, and that would kind of explain the not so great translation and that. With that being said though, I will still probably follow it for the time being to see if the translation/editing gets any better at all. If it doesn't then I'll probably drop it.
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
If there's a book am really waiting for its update,it this one ..?
Read up to chapter 184 for now.Sadly the MC gets blinded by power. Making 5-year olds from clan work hard. Using public military funds for the growth of his own personal forces and clan. Not only that, but also framing with a death sentence a quite strong loose cultivator who has not done anything wrong except refusing to bow to MC and become his lackey. Maybe in some jungle law cultivation novel that would seem normal, but in this one, there are rules set by a big sect in which families can't murder and plunder weaker families as they please if they don't break the rules and the big sect also made restrains to big families so that loose cultivators and weak families can live rather safely and have an opportunity to grow despite so many things being monopolized. MC's family survived for as many as hundreds of years pretty much only because these rules were in place - despite being in decline, the environment seems to be quite stable and relatively safe, at least for the last 10-20 years there have not been any beast or evil cultivator attacks against them.As it is portrayed, MC does harm to others for no reason, seems like a tyrannical villain and a hypocrite.There was a case where MC stole some families' business and one of the more desperate family head retaliated out of desperation - because the business was too important for him (his fleeting breakthrough opportunity depended on that). MC basically cut their line of income and then made them a scapegoat ,,to scare monkeys". Of course, the family was not some good-hearted family, but hey, it could be solved another way. Especially when, after 50-100 chapters this amount money was nothing in the eyes of MC..When other big guys asked him to join them, they didn't threaten or oppress him or his clan. Even when he refused, they either gave gifts or just dropped the topic. But when MC gets refused, he ,,feels uncomfortable
Tell me how high you had to be to think you was in another world? 5 years and now just coming down. /
Heh this novel is trash, mc is reincarnation of an Emperor and yet he is so weak with coward personalities, someone threatening his family and yet he DIDN'T kill it, the author always make the villain is scheming against the MC, but the MC is so stupid to let the villain go away, the story is so forced in an instance all of the MC aquintances suddenly became strong or they are one of the expert from the three realms, the cultivation is a BS, why you say? Well its because there is no divine sense to sense your surrounding, and the deities and the pro claimed war god is BS, the plot armor of this shiet novel is MC having stronger subordinates than him just because he is REINCARNATION of an Emperor. MC is just messing with someone stronger than him and treat them like a shiet and dont have any little bit of respect even though he dont like to kill living being randomly. In my overall 'I put this novel in my trash can'Iv'e read past 700+ chapter already before write this.
This book is great and all, but the grammar is very frustrating to me. If you could somehow fix that, then I would be really happy. Other than the grammar everything is great, especially the character Erin.
I say, story is very good but, is the book being dropped or something?? Its already a few months now and there's no updates. ? ...................................
because someone asked and corrected my novel, so I made this statement. I have fixed the synopsis, hopefully it will be easier to understand. let me tell you a little plot. so actually there are two story lines, from 2 different novels. one is EEWAO and another is New World which I haven't published yet. the stories of the two novels are interconnected and when EEWAO is finished I will publish New World novel that I myself feel is very very good, because there are lessons in history, culture and so on from all over the world.I created EEWAO to remember my game friends and improve the quality of my writing before I published New World. so I hope when I make New World, the quality will be better. btw I am still learning to write, so your review is very useful for me.
