Needs more sauce ........ Overall it is wholesome
I mean, what can I say? I love it; the author and the book.Writing Quality: no obvious mistakes that would take away from the flow of the story. If there are mistakes, they are very minor and aren’t even worth mentioning.Stability of Updates: just... yup.Story Development: the time skips aren’t too extreme to the point of rushing but each and every chapter tells a story, a backstory or some tiny bit of foreshadowing. All in all, awesome :)Character Design: alright, I really don’t like the MC but it isn’t why you’re thinking. The author did a wonderful job of writing a MC for this book but honestly, he seems like a man-child. He lashes out very easily, only feels guilty when caught and has trouble controlling his emotions. But now that I think about it more, it’s most likely the power and wealthy getting to his mind; corrupting the once innocent Santo in the new Gustavo.World Background: the hotel plot is amazing and so is the struggle for it. Most of the time, the mafia or gang bit is overdone and even to the point of a formula (MC gets robbed/ wronged by mafia, MC storms mafia, mafia retaliates, MC’s plot armor defends, repeat and mix) but here, I think it was a nice touch.5/5 bravo!!!
i like this novel i want to do ****** review but qidian wont let me type less than 140 character so im confused what to do now, so let me share fried sweet banan recipeigredient:3 firm bananas, 1/2 cup white sugar ,1 1/4 teaspoons ground cinnamon ,3 tablespoons butterCut each banana half into 3 or 4 pieces.Mix sugar and cinnamon together in a shallow bowl.Melt butter in a skillet over medium-low heat; add banana slices and cook until golden brown, 5 to 10 minutes. Transfer banana slices to a paper towel-lined plate. Coat banana slices, 1 at a time, with cinnamon-sugar.here it is, i hope you enjoy it
I haven't read this yet, but I know I would hate it!!!!!! Apocalypse genre? Hate it so much I puke!!!!! Zombie?? Monster?? Hate it for the cliche!!! Game system? Hate it also!!!! You cliche writer, write and post more chapter so I can hate it more!!!!!! More chapter for God sake so I can thrash you!!! *Actually, I'm just writing it to fulfill the exp requirement. *
I Read a part of the first chapter of this novel like 2 years ago i believe and this is the first time im seeing the translation on webnovel so ill try it again
For those looking for a good historical fiction which a modern man tries to use his wits to gain an advantage in a fantasy scenario, this isn't itThis novel is disappointing because they give the MC the perfect weapon to tackle the next mission (so if there was a fire demon they would give him a water mage just to be able to counter it perfectly)The MC's knowledge is barely relevant as the system gives him textbooks on what to do (agriculture etc) Lazy writing and poor plot
The narrative of the story is very intriguing, creating a lot of mystery and drawing the reader in for more, I have to admit I didn't expect the story to start how it did, but I'm really glad I continued reading to find out more about Ryan.
Em. .. OmG look: Tang Zhen dismantled the all-terrain car and transported it all to Building World after traveling between the two worlds a couple of times.Tang Zhen, who had been busy for a long time, didn’t rest. He squatted in the grass and started to assemble the scattered parts of the all-terrain car.Half an hour later. WHAT! ! HALF AN HOUR. Mind you it's only at chap 27. He has the strength of an adult, YES. HIS spacial space is 1m^2
modern world but everyone acts and talks like it's a xianxia world.... modern world but everyone acts and talks like it's a xianxia world.... modern world but everyone acts and talks like it's a xianxia world....
I find the translations to be directly translated, some sentences do not make sense. Also I think the translation is a bit rushed, which I do not mind because I would like get to the conclusion or end of the book/story. The release of the chapters is also a bit slow, I'm not sure if there are 2 chapters per day or per week being released?
Well written interesting storyline. Is nicely tied to the Sigmas reluctant mate. Impatiently waiting for the rose and the dagger :) Keep going Neener Beener
thank you. Hunter and Abigail, Rafael and Emeralds stories were wonderful.