I'm sorry for the sad news ? for your health and impending hiatus of this novel. I hope to read more of your novel so I'll be praying for your quick and complete recovery ? please don't go and reincarnate to a new world with a system ? there are still much to experience in this world. Who knows, you might retain your memories in the next life and be more prepared in conquering the new world ?
Ok I just got to say does anyone else find it ironic that the god of faith betrayed him ummmmufffc.
I wish more people saw this novel so I mark the 5 stars and why I like what I see at the momentThis is done with Google TranslatorYeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time. Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory.Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding)Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this)Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above)World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.)If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
How you explain everything in details is really helpful and I love it, its very understandable ???. You synopsis is short and it didn't reveal much which is brilliant.
I don’t like romance nor female lead, although it seems you have male lead too (unless I read that wrong). Your story has potential and interesting, especially since you have a mystery aspect to it. The mystery is what brings people into the story. You have grammar mistakes, especially a lot of places that need commas. Remember, commas make a difference and the story flow better. Without the commas, it is like everything is together. Other than that, your story has potential, keep up the good work!
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ME!Taylor SwiftI promise that you'll never find another like meI know that I'm a handful, baby, uhI know I never think before I jumpAnd you're the kind of guy the ladies want(And there's a lot of cool chicks out there)I know that I went psycho on the phoneI never leave well enough aloneAnd trouble's gonna follow where I go(And there's a lot of cool chicks out there)But one of these things is not like the othersLike a rainbow with all of the colorsBaby doll, when it comes to a loverI promise that you'll never find another likeMe-e-e, ooh-ooh-ooh-oohI'm the only one of meBaby, that's the fun of meEeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-oohYou're the only one of youBaby, that's the fun of youAnd I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-eI know I tend to make it about meI know you never get just what you seeBut I will never bore you, baby(And there's a lot of lame guys out there)And when we had that fight out in the rainYou ran after me and called my nameI never wanna see you walk away(And there's a lot of lame guys out there)'Cause one of these things is not like the othersLivin' in winter, I am your summerBaby doll, when it comes to a loverI promise that you'll never find another likeMe-e-e, ooh-ooh-ooh-oohI'm the only one of meLet me keep you companyEeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-oohYou're the only one of youBaby, that's the fun of youAnd I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-eHey, kids!Spelling is fun!Girl, there ain't no I in "team"But you know there is a "me"Strike the band up, one, two, threeI promise that you'll never find another like meGirl, there ain't no I in "team"But you know there is a "me"And you can't spell "awesome" without "me"I promise that you'll never find another likeMe-e-e (yeah), ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh (and I want ya, baby)I'm the only one of me (I'm the only one of me)Baby, that's the fun of me (baby, that's the fun of me)Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh (oh)You're the only one of you (oh)Baby, that's the fun of youAnd I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-eGirl, there ain't no I in "team" (Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh)But you know there is a "me"I'm the only one of me (Oh-oh)Baby, that's the fun of me(Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh)Strike the band up, one, two, threeYou can't spell "awesome" without "me"You're the only one of youBaby, that's the fun of youAnd I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-e
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As much as I can enjoy the millions of face slapping novels out there, this just isn’t it. I don’t enjoy plagiarism(not an accusation). Everyone in the novel is brain dead, I almost thought a gen Alpha wrote this. Grade: 21/100