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The guild had tried to come back but Twinkle sniped them as soon as they came into range.
A sweet small voice distorted the tranquil environment as a wavy figure appeared out of nowhere. Her sharp eyes and youthful face fought off the mood where the great count was in, as she took the place of the light in this dark world.
They got up on their feet and when back to their respective rooms to cultivate. Liuyun found a comfortable spot to sit on the bed and as he tried to cultivate, he coughed out another mouthful of blood. His eyes slowly became more bloodshot and his body was losing strength at every moment.
Though it wasn't enough to be exactly pinpoint and completely correct that he chose not to tell Laskey.
Su Song who could understand her innocent grand-daughters thoughts couldn't help but say.
"Tales of Kiran" presents a richly crafted fantasy world with a 100-level dungeon, each 10 levels featuring unique environments. The innovative magical systems, diverse settings, and engaging system mechanics create an immersive experience. Adding more geopolitical details and character backstories could enhance depth.
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This novel is an absolute delight. The storytelling is smooth, and the way everything unfolds is just captivating. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Truly a remarkable read.
Hello everyone author here. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my book. I know I have a bad schedule making it hard for me to update like promised. But I will keep trying my best so please keep supporting my book.
I'm at chapter 400 and I've decided to just stop reading now.I like his other story with the game thing and even though it feels similar, this MC is just hollow The progression feels inconsistent and the world is just weird. I say author is good at writing but whatever this is, it's just not good.This would be my first time dropping a completed book before it's completed and my OCD will hate me for it. But I'm tired of sleeping off in the middle of reading everytime
So far the story is interesting, different from other stories which focus more on power domination (I mean he is OP but he uses his cheats with different actions). The beginning of the storyline is also unpredictable. Like he is indeed OP but not all wishes can be achieved because he has cheats, that's one of the experiences of MC's growth.The story leads to building an empire so it requires a lot of human resources. Just a little criticism when the MC is too trusting of others or how he thinks about it towards new people. And fortunately these people are not selfish and play tricks behind the scenes. Maybe explain more clearly what his thoughts are.I was confused as to why the MC didn't use his cheat to negotiate with important people in other realms and maximize profits, but if you logic it carefully there is a high risk because in this story the MC only has one life and is at risk of being colonized by other realms in the future (remember humans only new visitors compared to other realms that are already strong).Oh yes, there are several other things that bother me, such as the event system which is not really shown and I think the prizes from the epic box are too small because in the story it is explained that even nascent souls fight for it.Thanks for the story. Opening of new views.
Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.
