Hold then asked, "Do you remember me?"
Then an hour or so later...
While the story has a good base theme and the authors prose sufficient I was forced to stop reading due to the jarring plot. Meaning there are all these things that happen in this story that are very poorly melded together. It does not feel like one contigous story, but rather several well written scenes not quite put together right. Once the author gets over this issue it will a pleasure to read his work. Until then... I'm out.
Way Neo: *sigh* these bastards, I will get revenge and take back what belong to me.
Quite nice one with unstable updates.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sangat bagus tidak ada pilih kasih dalam ras. Biasanya yang saya liat tentang penciptaan mc selalu bilang dia akan netral tapi banyak yang nelayan ludahnya sendiri
Netore Author! Never succeeded.There shouldn’t be standpoints in society.
Would not reccomend, the author slapped the villain tag in there for 0 reason the mc is as heroic as you can find, justifies every action and and the whole schtick anyway I would beacon the author to remove the villain tag as it is false advertisement and leads to disappointed viewers and this is review is soley for other readers to enjoy villain mc novels ti read not to announce my departure to the auhtor and he should in no way be dissapointed that he lost a reader I just want to request the author drop the villain tag as I was highly dissapointed and don’t want others to feel the same
I mean the story is very boring, there's so much transition from future and the past, like mann can you just calm the fck down, i mean like wtf its very confusing. Example the next chapter will be in the future instantly then will show you the future mc, like i mean if you're gonna show the future mc whats the point of building the character right wtf
Bruh another one? Just don’t drop it please
Following the footsteps of most authors on Webnovel, I would set the first milestone in the Review section by giving myself 5 stars??This is my first creation as a amateur novelist. Hope you guys will support this novel all along the way ?Thank you?
dropped chapter 10, if author had kept it as mc being a duke and a judge with special ability to read people I'd have loved itif he had 2ndary ability to speed up his thought process but in his kind everything slows down I'd have loved itbut then author makes some fire thing appear beast aura or something, has him touch an assailant who then burst into black flamesthat just ruined it for me