When I read harvard, I thought it's that famous school. When I found out it's a name, I was like, okay that's cool. I find your story funny to read, although I'm sure it's not a comedy. I'm entertained by your plot and story set up, especially the character. When it said "sort of float around" I crack up. Anyway, your story is a good material and I wish you luck in your writing journey. Keep up the good work author!
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Oh please do more in this world. This was a well written book that drew me in. You did great on building this world and I loved the characters. This was vivid and bloodthirsty.
Petition to bring back The Era of Gods!.........................................................................................................
if you're gonna incorporate a dual cultivation system in your novel, at the very least put it in the synopsis. thank god at the very least you put it on the 1st chapter so i could immediately drop this
I'm pleasantly surprised by this novel.I really dislike apocalyspe novel and always find them trash because of all those harem or romance stuff or even stupid mc.This one have annoying girls but they get slapped by the mc or even killed, the mc is smart and do things step by step without being reckless.--------------------System spoil The mc have a system that ask him items vs system gold and with those gold he can buy the "evolve" function from the system.
so far he is a slave of the system
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
One of the most cliche, repetitive, boring Cultivation Novels I ever dropped
Ugh, I want to like it but it's so annoying, brainless and pointless that I can't ignore it anymore. It's pretending to be about the main plot of a cultivator going back to when he was younger in order to so it steadily and correctly. With some face slaps along the way are expected tooWhat it is actually about is a caste of perpetually shallow and brainless fools continually being maximum nastiness at every opportunity. If a character has an opportunity to be absolutely nasty and shallow they will. They might also briefly contemplate why they are feeling that way, but then declare that he deserves it anyway. Even after seeing people being beat up, being supernaturally intimidated, and seeing high class individuals treating the MC with respect, pointless people still view him as trash.The novel is about going back in time and after a bagillion chapters getting back at the high school kids who were mean to you. So tiresome and stupid.If he ever does get finished teaching the group of teenagers not to bother him I'm sure he'll have to do the same thing wherever he goes with whoever he meets. UghYou could say this MC doesn't care about these ants so that's why he gets mired in these situations of being looked down on and people being pointlessly nasty. But that's not true. That's just the excuse the novel is trying to use. Getting back at these ants is entirely what this novel is about and it does it over way too many chapters in an exhausting manner.
Awesome story ........................................................................................................................................................................................................... 140 characters
This novel is a rare find in the kingdom building genre which is usually flooded with fantasy/magic/sci-fi elements instead this one is realistic. It is an interesting novel with a lot of attractive features, the MC is ruthlessly pragmatic in cutting out the cancer that infects his empire. My second favourite kingdom building novel after Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece