This is the author's second account as you can tell I post dark mtl novels on this account with 5 chapters a day forgive my shamelessness for giving myself 5stars while it deserves 1 star
MC build a Company called Ant?, its poor
j'ai adorer ce novel , j'ai me suis amuser a imaginer si il créez des jeux vidéo qu'est ce que sa donnerait merci de traduire ce roman hate de voir plus de mise a jour
honestly a good book with adequate grammar and a intelligent MC who truly understands to be a cold calculated villain
Nice plot. however, there seems to be no character development. I already read 800+ chaps but there is barely progression in the story. author, I appreciate your hard work in writing but please don't repeat the parts of the story, usually their thoughts by rewording it. it's getting quite boring.
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"just like in canon" I can't count the number of time I read these word he don't lie when he say he's lazy Naruto is overpowered but nothing change in the story. no butterfly effect it's really the original story with a side story of Naruto getting stronger
Magic, Vampires, Natural Disasters, The SCP foundation.This novel has it all. Especially excited by that last one.Hope it gets picked.Cheers.
i cant say that its slow start but its progressing really well. you easily get attached with tess. what made me read this is about the forbidden romance tag. lol. anyway. this is 3rd person pov so i like it. cant handle 1st person pov. keep it up.
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It shows that the author isn't a native English speaker. Too bad, I would love to read this kind of story. Maybe if the author got himself a good editor could this story be salvaged.
I love u r story and hope to read more chap soon