I only started this novel to get a free pass and I'm so glad I did it. Although I'm only on chapter 5 atm I think it has all the makings of a grand adventure. Keep up the great writing.
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I've written a significant part of this novel before posting it, well not significant but enough of it. it's basically a slice of life cultivation novel, but not the jovial kind, this is a slow burn with a main character focused on revenge and getting stronger. facets and aspects of cultivation would be explored in more depth than is seen in most other novels, there will be politics, questionable decisions, mature themes, wars, and perhaps a little bit of army building. maybe a city or sect building adventure, but who knows. unlike all my other novels, this one does not have a system of any sort. everything is as realistic as I can possibly make it, chronicling the corruption of an innocent boy due to tragedies of life into a villain that quite frankly is as flawed and raw and real as anyone else. he doesn't win all his battles, he looses some, he runs away some times, but he always comes out on top. I'll try not rely too much on plot armor, just hard work and guts and maybe some luck. also fair warning this is a Harem story, however it's not a romantic one. please give this a chance, thanks so much for reading.
Title: 厉害了我的原始人/The Caveman Made Me AwesomeRating: 8.7(272)Chapters: 950(Ongoing)No. of works: 1Date: 2017/09Achievements: Got 100,000 collections.
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
The way the author write is kinda unique, using himself as a narrator and describing the situation work. But it's confusing on it's own, the way the author use punctuation is a mess. And too much "tell" that make it bland.But the story was good, the concept of revenge are neatly arranged with nerdy past of mc.Overall, it's decent to read.
It's already gone of the voting pool??? So fast man!! That's bad, more one good novel not chosen. I'm so sad now. I really liked it, now the only way is go for mtl.
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Not really a review. Just been following Ur other novel for a long time so just giving it a 5⭐️ for supp.
so far I'm up to chapter 97 and I have to say this is an awesome novel. all the characters a likable and it is a very funny novel with some good action. the main character is not over powered so far. definitely reccomend it.
I have read well past what is translated.If you like MC's that only need the barest of excuses to kidnap and rape as many women as he wants, then this story is for you. Kingdom building with DBZ style power up fights. Expect some fights to take several chapters as the MC and his opponent power up over and over again until everyone else is just left to stare and watch as he fights. Story had a lot of good concepts and I was looking forward to seeing where it went, but frankly, i don't like reading about an unabashed rapist and I stopped enjoying DBZ years ago. Translation quality is decent even though he takes some liberties at parts. The translator is consistent. But in the end I have no rape fantasies and kingdom building is meaningless because of the individually overpowered MC to this degree.