From 500+ chapters onwards...... the chapters are all mismatchzzzzzzzzz
Of these 70 chapters,I see same plot repetition.i hope there would be some plot development and not our mc always being very low key. overall, I'm not tired of the repetitive plot yet.
I tried my best yall i hope you like what i wrote so far if this gets like a lot of support i will be happy to make a Season 2 and turn this into a manga <3
well the story has a lot of potential there is simply too many chapters wasted with life and basically a whole Lotta nothing that needs .
Review as of chapter 14.Alright i have been following the story since the very beginning .Now let's get some basics out of the way it''s a very well written story with amazing descriptions and fights.Though there are some grammmatical mistakes they have been reducing as we progress.Moreover i noticed the auhor has corrected many of them.What i love about the novel the most is the protagonist if i have to compare him with some that can only be our beloved FANG YUAN from RI.Now don't get me wrong there are diffrences like how Long Chen can feel kinship.But the qualities that make them similar are.1)Ambitious - Both Fang Yuan and Long Chen are very ambitious so you won't get your average Jiang Chen which has no shred of ambition whatever.Long Chen unapologetically pursuing his goals is a breath of fresh air.2)They are both evil and they know it.A lot of protagonist like Su Zimo from ESK or Long Chen from NSBHA appear to be ruthless. IMO they are kinda okay.The author also tries to make them look the good guy by making the villains as humanely despicable as possible. That's not the case with Long Chen if you stand in his way you are a goner.He is by no means a hypocrite and understand the laws of jungle.3)They both feel like they are in control.The last point is a bit hard to explain but lemme just say this no mc like Fang Yuan or Long Chen appear to be in complete control of the situation.It also stems fromt their arrogance that all the people around them are beneath them and mere chess pieces for them to manipulate.All in all author you better don't give up this masterpiecce.
First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best.Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
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why why why why why why why why why why why its been a month since you haven't uploaded a single chapter -_-* ?! I don't know why are you stacking up the chapter i have completed 2 comic and i am waiting for them to upload a chapter . i am REALLY ANGRY!!!!!!!!!!!
Good read. This is an interesting thriller. Although I was amazed by the Table of contents. and I know that there are alot more chapters coming. I can never create a table of content beforehand lol.good read
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The words in this book touched my heart. Even my favourite author didn't reach the level of brilliance that I could witness in this book today.An eye opener. Strong messenger. Highly recommended!
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