My Rebirth is Scientific

This is best cricket fanfiction I've read on all of internet and the good quality and insight you give us is a big plus.Hope you get more support and continue this?.

The story is progressing smoothly with character development. Also you should add more tags that correlate to the story like kingdom buildings, city building, etc.

really one of the best novels here. its a fresh air to cultivation novels by giving more rational and less greedy enemies and the MC is not one-dimensional. overall the story has depth in terms of the characters and how the story progresses.

First Review - Chapter 308 . . . A Book Worth Reading, It's a good Eastern Fantasy for anyone that likes this gener . ( Below things are all Personal Opinion) Pros - 1. Well Written With Few Mistakes in writing quality.2. Good Power ups With Steady Pace , need improvement but Works.3. Not biased on only one or two characters .4. No overly done sensitive things for kids so kids can read as well .5. Characters aren't 2 dimensional cons- 1. Same word mistakes for hundreds of chapters with no improvement . ( Ex: ConsOriginal that should be Conspiracy )2. Characters feel alive but none feel too important.3. Lack of Minor details that create suspense or thrill . but the author did try can't deny.4. World Building needs more work and details .that's it for now , I'll make another review later after throughout observation and reading there are more then 2000 chapters already after all .

This story started out somewhat interesting with the online-like world merging into the real world theme with a relatively low-key MC, but spirals out of control into collecting beauties, letting trouble makers get away and plot armor to save the day.It feels like most of the human world conflict could have been avoid if MC would have just told everyone the danger outside of the world instead of trying to take it on himself and being the human worlds enemy. Also, MC could have rooted out trouble makers, but that would have solve too much of the issues instead of letting things go.

          well the story has a lot of potential there is simply too many chapters wasted with life and basically a whole Lotta nothing that needs .