The book is nice and it is very interesting keep it up baby girl?❤️❤️♥️?
Not bad but also not good.
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this novel was one of the winners of Spirity , so it had great potentials, but alas it got a rushed ending , everything was rushed ,from relationships ,romance, powere ,etc ...even the writing quality was rushed at the end ? , full of misspelling and wrong names.and at the end of the day all MC's powers were borrowed from others, as if he wasn't the MC of this story ...but at least it got a happy ending
The whole concept of the story is interesting. Hidden mysteries amd secrets that have the potential to explode into an amzing storyline in the future? Count me in. The 50 floor tower did remind of a part of the comic Player Reborn, though. I like the dialogs and character interactions—they're immersive, real and flow quite well. The world building is coming together nicely, and using names that look like they belong in a fantasy-like civilization helps a lot. I look forward to reading more about Maha and getting answers to the prologue.
Hope this gets picked! If anyone finds the raw please drop it below. I don’t think i’ve read a novel with the narrative editor cheat that i’ve been satisfied with, but this summary has me hopeful the author doesn’t nerf it too hard. The sword bit at the end is a little red flag, but it probably won’t be the main weapon.
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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. ................................ ......
tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it.along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it.OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.
Very Interesting, this story makes readers can imagine quite well. Continue your work, I'll still be waiting for the continuation of this story.Characters inside this story are quite strong
if he ends up being a hero don't tag a villain
Hmm.. i like this novel it capture my reading interest by reading the few chapters I also like the character background and the design of the golems . I hope hope you keep writing this novel author because i like this novel.... ☺☺