Tommyky
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
62 ch5 stars~! First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments. Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original.Good character design.Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good.The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes?Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters. If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥)However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars.♡⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝
Thanks for the current upload, much appreciated. What about your other book “Don’t Panic, I have a Spiritual Spring Farm”? Is it going to be updated. Are these two novels published in another platform?
There are some mistakes, but keep up the good work
Brilliantly written with delicious plot, pace and character development. Definitely a novel worth adding to your library and showering with power stones :)
I can felt the delicious taste on my tongue, beautiful bitter-bitter taste, I chewed with a joy, even i dont realize if there is nothing left fried chicken in my plane.
That is still a mystery.
The fairy was silent.
"Please!.." Albina insisted.
"Yes, I shall tell them once they come to get breakfast."
by the brute power, without any real computer intelligence.
"Kita menang taruhan,katanya zulfha, si merza sama salsha bakalan tunangan"
