After I read it to 50 chapter i can tell this story have a decent world building, Eventhough, Lan Hengsheng was arrogant at first but later chapter he seem to be more mature, btw keep going?
Amazing ?? and interesting highly recommend I got hooked up by the chapter one I can't wait to read it all to see what comes out fighting author ??
you don't need to put the 'upbeat' in front of every fvkin young man...use his name for goddamn sake. so many things omitted, where he lives, who he lives with, is he orphan, 0 background
constanly ends words with an s instead of ed sometimes multiple times in the same paragraph, making the entire first chapter feel incredibly difficult to read as if written by a 5 yr old.
What !!?? A monster I can't kill let's go back and upgrade....kill the monster take 2 steps and another monster pops up that he can't kill... let's go back and upgrade...Ill def kill you next time !!! let me guess it will repeat a third time I bet ya...Story progression is non-existent... The only thing is level-up and minion upgrade as of ch 95
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At chapter 35 I can’t read anymore and like the story is absolutly amazing just has this book been deleted
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Shameless Author’s review ?This is a story that is worth your attention, dive into the world of fantasy and be thrilled There may be mistakes as the story goes on but the suspense and plot is very vast and interesting Enjoy the stories of The Supreme Writer?
I'm not very much into romance but that's just me. It also needs more detail. Everything goes by too quickly and I can't comprehend what's going on. Otherwise a very good read!
it is very interesting can you continue because living me in suspense will make me lose interest in the story can you please quickly update the remaining
good for time pass until you got good novel