Tiene buena trama y todo, pero es demasiado confuso y dificil de leer. Primero estaban contandole una historia y derrepente aparecio con una herida, luego de que estaban en Bravoos y despues en Poniente. Debería explicar mejor las cosas. Pero en si la tama hasta ahora es buena
The typical alternate universe novel where the mc uses the works of his past world to make it big but I liked it more than I thought I would and i quite recomend this novel usually this trope gets old but this novel made me reignite my passion a little for these tropes it's not even comparable as to how much I liked it years ago but it's good also dont take this novel too seriously it's not ment to be taken seriously just relax on what ever bed you have put on some relaxing music or whatever to make you relaxed and not too tense or irratated by what's going on in your life and read the novel
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First of all this is normally not the type of genre of book I'd normally read but i decided to try this one out and let me just say I was pretty much impressed with the book. the first chapter got me hooked. An amazing story is what this is![img=recommend]
Hi Guys, Author here.
I don't have any complaints with this book. Your writing style is really good, you have a way with words, we get descriptions as well as dialogues, there are no grammatical errors as such. A good read. Recommend it for all!
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The book is great with regards to the world's backstory and the ongoing character development. It's just that it's so hard to read with a lot of grammatical errors. I suggest the author to get a beta reader or an editor in the side
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Can't recommend this. Poor character design and development. Awful world building. Not the greatest grasp on English. About the only good thing about this is maybe the chapter amount. The r-18 scenes are pretty poor so it doesn't even have that really going for it. If you do decide to read keep in mind this author is terribly terribly inconsistent at least up to where I've read. And if it gets better I simply do not care as I gave it a solid shot already.