It was fine until h
MC decided to play an NPC role... That's a trap that'll create a wall too big for the author to overcome and will create a dead end in his story.....
So far it has been oddly chill for me, which felt relaxing.
The first ten or so chapters are more of an introduction and everything feels nicely paced. Good work Author!
Its actually kinda good, love the synopis, love the character development, its a good book with great potential[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One dimension story with anything goes. You read this for the stop gag comedy but cold jokes every line makes the story incoherent and it becomes a 5min lame reality comedy show every chapter.
The story itself isn't bad and there are rarely any spelling mistakes, the problem only lies on the character interactions as every time mc interacts with other people it feels forced, and the stories pacing feels rushed but i'd read this rather than another monster integration, great story but has an mtl translation so bad it physically hurts my eyes
It's really good and beautiful. I feel Jake's pain as Abby doesn't seem to remember them. It's perfectly crafted with every ounce of sadness. The fact that only their sister is supporting them is really good.
Plus, "it doesn't matter if we end up together, we can make few memories to ourselves. "
Awesomely awesome that oozes awesomeness like a awesomely awesome machine with a an awesome awesomeness that has an avalanche of awesomeness which is very awesome.
So far, when I read until chapter 7, the story flows naturally, neither too slow nor too fast, so I immensely enjoyed it.
There are still some grammatical errors, but they're not too distracting, so I can still leave them alone.
I don't know how the main character will develop. Still, after seeing his new life in that fantasy world, for some reason, I feel a terrible feeling that he will start an adventure with a kind and clean heart, of course maybe the author sometimes dirtied it a little with dust, but I'm sure the base is still white, so I think a story with the main character like that is not my taste, of course, this is all just my assumption after reading up to 7 chapters.
This book is average at best.The pros :- The translation is ok - The characters are interesting- The interactions are entertainingThe pros :- The chapters are too short.Each chapter is so short that it feels like nothing substential happens in the story.- The story is too long.Seriously? 1100 + chapters and the book is still ongoing? A slice of life with over 100 chapters is - most of the time - boring in the long run.And it's the case here. So many unnecessary events( confrontations with the neighbours and other people) stretch the story . Plus, it becomes quickly repetitive.- The antagonists.They are too stupid. It's like aside from the Mc's family( counting the Ml as part of the family too), everyone is stupid.This isn’t entertaining at all, as they serve to make the Mc glow up.The ml is also a problem. He is ypur usual ice block. And even by 100~ chapters, we don't know about his motivations for marrying the Mc , and he seems to not have any personality aside from being cold and domeenering.- The pace is slow.As i said , by 100+ chapters , the story is still in it's early stages and this just feels like things are evolving at a snail's speed.All in all , this is your average chinese novel about reincarnation in the 19s.This book doesn't deserves that we spend coins on it.
Alright, story but hard to read as the mc is so small-minded... for an mc with a power like his, this is awful.
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Amazing story so far, I read blue phoenix aNd loved it, this story Is turning out to be a Great read. easy to read and follow , good characters and an immersive world. Well done
Just a reminder
As there is no translation of the English manual yet, this novel is translated from RAW Chinese directly, if your MTL is still low, I suggest you don't try or you will get a headache.
Enjoy Thanks